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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
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quote:
Originally posted by vercetti

Here's my tune in need of feedback:




The interesting part here is break 1 with the piano and stab although one stab note is off the last in the cycle).
That could be a great tune, but the rest for me is not so interesting although I can hear some very decent background atmospheric pad work.


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by matuto
Really good stuff nothing to be changed imho..

Here is something im currently working on:




Personally it doesn't grab be in a dance sense but none the less it is quite intriguing with the way you play the bass, the decent percs and the bit crushed melodic lines.

Seems well mixed to me. maybe some sort of vocal stab would lift it some?


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Richard Butler
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I saw the trailer for the new horror movie, Clown, and so just had to make something. This is me at my most comfortable in terms of producing.

The fx are deliberately loud to make people jump.

I will send this one out, any mix crits? I will have it mastered by Raphie.


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Evolve140
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hi guys

does this suck?




what about this guys? does this suck too? lol


https://soundcloud.com/evolve140/dimension-update




seriously i love all you guys. just trying to PUSH IT HARD.

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Storyteller
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quote:
Originally posted by Evolve140
hi guys

does this suck?




what about this guys? does this suck too? lol

Focus on the levels, they are all over the place. Mix-wise (as in seperation of instruments) you're doing just fine. Musically I have no real feedback.

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Now this one I like! You're setting a great and very minimal mood but keep it interesting throughout. Well done. Contact me if you like .


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quote:
Originally posted by Evolve140
what about this guys? does this suck too? lol


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seriously i love all you guys. just trying to PUSH IT HARD.


Just work on your dynamics and could go shopping with this one - nice balance and sounds !!!

Darek


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chris marsh
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I saw the trailer for the new horror movie, Clown, and so just had to make something. This is me at my most comfortable in terms of producing.

The fx are deliberately loud to make people jump.

I will send this one out, any mix crits? I will have it mastered by Raphie.



Hi Richard

its good to be back doing some music again

cool track! I think the first "thats not funny" is too dry maybe the whole track could do with more reverb imo

the fx at 1:00 like a reverse vocal fx is really cool how did you do that?

im Listening on my laptop and headphones, but the bass sounds banging, the fx are really cool and keep it interesting. Pretty warped!

I feel like the track could do with a nice big 909 ride on the off beat personally to help it chug along, or a bit more hi hats/percussion but that may just be me.


Heres my WIP. The mix is still rough and bear in mind its going to have vocals so I've deliberately left space etc


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quote:
Originally posted by chris marsh
Hi Richard

its good to be back doing some music again

cool track! I think the first "thats not funny" is too dry maybe the whole track could do with more reverb imo

the fx at 1:00 like a reverse vocal fx is really cool how did you do that?

im Listening on my laptop and headphones, but the bass sounds banging, the fx are really cool and keep it interesting. Pretty warped!

I feel like the track could do with a nice big 909 ride on the off beat personally to help it chug along, or a bit more hi hats/percussion but that may just be me.


Heres my WIP. The mix is still rough and bear in mind its going to have vocals so I've deliberately left space etc



really nice ^^^


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by chris marsh
Hi Richard

its good to be back doing some music again

cool track! I think the first "thats not funny" is too dry maybe the whole track could do with more reverb imo

the fx at 1:00 like a reverse vocal fx is really cool how did you do that?

im Listening on my laptop and headphones, but the bass sounds banging, the fx are really cool and keep it interesting. Pretty warped!

I feel like the track could do with a nice big 909 ride on the off beat personally to help it chug along, or a bit more hi hats/percussion but that may just be me.


Heres my WIP. The mix is still rough and bear in mind its going to have vocals so I've deliberately left space etc




Firstly the mix is great and I really like the sound choices. The snare is spot on, I can never find nice acoustic (semi acoustic) open metallic snares like that.
I really dig the bass when it's played normally, but when it goes dubbish and reverse it does not sit well and disturbs the enjoyment, plus mate without wanting to sound like a dick that classic whooping bass is a bit over done, so personally I stick more with the normally enveloped bass with only the odd variation in sound such as the odd 'massive' growl or whatever.

Looking forward to see how the vocals go.

Thanks for the feedback on my track.
Yes I will work on some of the vocals to make them have more impact and will consider the ride cymbals.
I have some other changes to make so it keeps the interest better. Glad you felt the bass is ok, this for me is my biggest issue as I do not have great monitoring.
Once I've got this track finished, over to Raphie for some analogue goodness. I've released quirky tracks like this before (PS I did not send to you Story teller as it is not your style in terms of the main thrust of your label.


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trying out some diff stuff..

idk how to embed sc into post.. im noob


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Evolve140
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Love

Fk u ghostea quit stealing my glory

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Evolve140
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Ya that chris marsh track is nice stuff. Show me how to make some bass sounds like that

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