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djnitride
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Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Texas

quote:
Originally posted by deegee
k so this is something I've been fiddling with. I know the mixing is craptacular--I'm really only looking for feedback about the general structure, if this is one worth pursuing.


@1:05 LOVE this sound and progression

I feel like you released the tension a little too fast after it though. Just a little bit, with a bit more sustained momentum it would be more coherent.

@4:00 would like to hear that one progression in a full energy section kinda like this

@5:00 I would maybe change the sound of the lead here to something a bit less harsh sounding, mixing aside. Maybe it would sound good once you mix it, not 100% sure though.

Overall I love the idea of the track and think its certainly a keeper. Keep working at it! I would definitely play to that progression @1:05 a bit more.

quote:
Originally posted by Innocence Lost
aww man this is awesome. This is one of my fav tracks from you. Love the vocal clips, fits well with the track and the sound design is ridiculous


Thanks man

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SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
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quote:
Originally posted by deegee
k so this is something I've been fiddling with. I know the mixing is craptacular--I'm really only looking for feedback about the general structure, if this is one worth pursuing.




Not so sure about that bass but the arp at the beginning is PHAT! Love it.
1:05 seems to have some really odd sounds and almost clashing.
The bass transitions seem to be somewhat off,to many areas where the airiness of the pads come through.

The vibe is cool and you have some great higher frequency stuff going on. I'd try to match those better with your main driving bassline.


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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
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quote:
Originally posted by djnitride
That would be awesome Richard, I am still working on my percussion technique but its no where near where I want it to be.

Here is the Master without any drums added: https://www.dropbox.com/s/xbu09do78...Master.wav?dl=0


wuts the BPM mate?


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djnitride
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
wuts the BPM mate?


110 BPM.

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Richard Butler
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Here's those drums, not sure if they really fit tho lol!



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djnitride
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Registered: Nov 2009
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's those drums, not sure if they really fit tho lol!




Nice! Its definitely different than the original track but I like the heavier percussion with the highs more pronounced in the mix.

Sounds better than mine for sure

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TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA

Zak McKracken & gordan100 - just a suggestion guys, please look at this thread rules:

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1. Post a track, comment on a track.
- That means that if you want to post a track you're working on, you first have to comment on a track.
2. Comment on the newest track posted
- Failure to do so will result in your track being ignored.
..................... .

This would definitely give you a better chance of getting more comments/reviews on your tracks.

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gordan100
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TranceLover, thanks for your suggestion

quote:
Originally posted by deegee
k so this is something I've been fiddling with. I know the mixing is craptacular--I'm really only looking for feedback about the general structure, if this is one worth pursuing.



I like how it starts, like the arp sound... but later on it's starts to be repetitive. From 2:00 to 3:00 - kinda psychedelic but too messy for me. From 4:00 it's starts to get really repetitive.

Edit
After second listening part from 2:00 to 3:00 sounds better ...
But i don't like where you take it later on.

Edit 2
After third listening the only part that bugs me is 3:40-4:40 and 4:58-5:50, because melody is not attractive enough to me.

I don't really know if i helped you

Last edited by gordan100 on Jun-09-2015 at 20:29

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Innocence Lost
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quote:
Originally posted by deegee
k so this is something I've been fiddling with. I know the mixing is craptacular--I'm really only looking for feedback about the general structure, if this is one worth pursuing.



Sure needs work, but I like it overall, its nice anyhow, cheers.

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gordan100
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I think i'm done with this.

Is it any good?

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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

It could use better drums mate, that would pull it together IMO. Snappy like an old black guy would do it on the drums, kinda 'get on up, a like sex machine' drums.


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Richard Butler
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Cam someone give me their ears on this, the football club track I'm doing.
I seem to have too much bass, do you agree?

I should re-do the crowd chant, it sounds nasty.


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