quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
Thanks for the feedback on my tiny soundbyte guys!
Oof, I love that original track (quickly downloaded the stems just now to remove the forced likes and application access right afterwards). Although I don't think it is quite what they're looking for in the remix competition the track sounds okay. At around the 3:50 mark I do expect more of a climax than I hear now, maybe build some more anticipation and tension there before the climax?
Mixwise I feel the energy that is in the music is absent in the beats. Overall quite well mixed but it just needs more punch in my opinion. |
I would be interested to see you do an entry since you like the original, there is still time to enter!
quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Overall, I see where your going on this track. I actually dig the groove as it is constant and moving (for the most part).
There are certain areas of the arrangement that stick out in the mix a bit to much imo , but for the most part the mix is solid. There is a slight muddiness to the mix but that could very well be remedied or maybe its your artistic imprint. Either way, it has alot of clean elements.
Nice Work !! |
I wish the muddiness was a creative decision but it is just a weakness in my mixing/sound design tbh.
quote: | Originally posted by evo8
would like the kick to have more thump
@storyteller, not much to go on so hard to judge :-/ |
I am not very adept at choosing kicks!
Thanks for the feedback guys, kind of confirms my thoughts on the song. Still some weaknesses in my production but with some improvements overall I hope.
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