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Here's an experimental break track I'm making,
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Production seems tight atm, sounds bright and has alot of ambiance but punchey at the same time.
At the same time, the arrangement seems confusing. Almost feels like a meld of break beat with house. I am unsure if that is your artistic desire to craft the two and your intention or, it was unforeseen. To me..it sounds disjointed.
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I am actually in the same boat with this Wip. I am working in 140 and adding elements of dubstep (no..this wip is NOT dubstep only the bpm) and a great a capella. Arrangement wise, I like it. Compositional end is frustrating me.
It just sounds disjointed,almost as if it's battling itself and I cant explain why I persist. Usually after 24 hours and it's gone.
But I am intrigued to see If I can pull this one out...very different beat pattern I am working with.
But..here it is. I dunno..feedback always appreciated.
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Phil
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