Like the second half. Has a nice groove and flows nicely. Don't really think that intro part has enough teeth to act as a main melody, if that was the intention.
Feb-19-2015 14:00
Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
to be completely honest i'm not sure what the intention there was. i'm totally open to suggestion on this one.
Feb-19-2015 21:23
Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
off to a slow start but it builds well. nice punchy mixing on the low/mid stuff. tho not fanatic about the kick tho and the drums are a bit loopy for me. hard to read the track where it's going and so forth, it is what it is. mixing is okay but stays pretty safe
Feb-19-2015 23:10
SystematicX1
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Washington Coast
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Originally posted by Evolve140
took things a bit trancey eh mhak kick btw, tuned track
Dig it actually man..house vibe with some melodic overtones. And personally, I like that kick. I find it very suitable.
The vox chop has a nice feel to it as well.
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Ok..this is going to be rather comical. I am about to serve a plate full of cheese =OP
I have never worked on a dubstep track before and have been urged to do so for quite some time. Needless to say I decided to go for it.
Again, it is cheesy and I know this is a trance board but I just wanted to get a reaction.
Maybe someone like seandroid might have some clue as to the mess I just created....lol
Funy thing is, it isn't even on 140 bpm but rather a rock tempo of 87. Added some trap elements as well. Protect your ears on this one..lol
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Feb-20-2015 07:15
Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
Feb-20-2015 07:38
TranceElevation
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2010
Location:
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Originally posted by scorpradio
Protect your ears on this one..lol
<< Aaaah NO! Won't even bother pressing play >>
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Feb-20-2015 08:31
deegee
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2014
Location: Toronto, Canada
quote:
Originally posted by scorpradio
Ok..this is going to be rather comical. I am about to serve a plate full of cheese =OP
Definitely cheese, but could see it as the music under the opening credits or ______montage in some action flick.
Feb-20-2015 09:16
Storyteller
Supreme tracneaddict
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: The Netherlands
quote:
Originally posted by scorpradio
Ok..this is going to be rather comical. I am about to serve a plate full of cheese =OP
I have never worked on a dubstep track before and have been urged to do so for quite some time. Needless to say I decided to go for it.
Again, it is cheesy and I know this is a trance board but I just wanted to get a reaction.
Maybe someone like seandroid might have some clue as to the mess I just created....lol
Funy thing is, it isn't even on 140 bpm but rather a rock tempo of 87. Added some trap elements as well. Protect your ears on this one..lol
(fyi-terrible rip at 192 as its on mixcloud. Hearing it now sounds like it was massively compressed,which it is)
If less is more think about how much more more would be.
-Frasier
Feb-20-2015 09:30
Richard Butler
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
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Originally posted by scorpradio
It sounds good but I think I recognise some of the samples so maybe mask em / mangle them / personalise them. I might be wrong though, but some sound very familiar?
Thanks for the feedback all..lol yea cheese ::frowns::
Yea Richard, I'll have to ask my friend on this one..lol I know he said he used a "few" samples on this (as I suck at Reese)
With that said however when I got back the ableton file (we were trading off) what I saw was fairly chopped up so I will take a closer look when I get home.
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Feb-20-2015 16:22
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
quote:
Originally posted by scorpradio
Ok..this is going to be rather comical. I am about to serve a plate full of cheese =OP
I have never worked on a dubstep track before and have been urged to do so for quite some time. Needless to say I decided to go for it.
Again, it is cheesy and I know this is a trance board but I just wanted to get a reaction.
Maybe someone like seandroid might have some clue as to the mess I just created....lol
Funy thing is, it isn't even on 140 bpm but rather a rock tempo of 87. Added some trap elements as well. Protect your ears on this one..lol
For me this track is missing a little sub-melodic theme or some form of break with this melodic element driving it but the rest sounded interesting and Sean (Seandroid) may give you some more advice how to conect everything properly.
Cheers man,
Darek
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