This is really good, man. The vocal sample isn't loud enough, the rest of the instruments are currently eclipsed by the kick and there's too much of the 1000-2000 Hz kiss on the kick drum. I had to turn up my speakers to get the full picture of the tune. While there's a lot of work left to be done, as proof of concepts go, it works. Keep at it.

___________________

Now with extra singles!
my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012

thanks bro, for the usefull feedback much apreciate it. firts of all, where i live , i have to work with headphones, otherwise my neighbours get a bit stressed out if i am workin on my tyracks, so that explains a bit that not every sound is exactly in place as youw ill know working on headphones is very tricky if it xomes down too producing
indeed i had the vocal smaples turn down a bit, will chamge that for sure. already had some off from the kick in my equalizer, but as i said i cant change much aslong i wqork with ehadphones , when i am workin on the track again will work with speakers , and change it all , so that the sound will be better overal.
greets n respect

___________________
for all my mixes and productions check out my soundcloud page

http://soundcloud.com/dj-electric-samurai