Originally posted by Raphie
Yep! The vibe is there, whats missing is a female ROLAND lick on the 2 and 4 and ehhmm or ooowhh or yeah, but chopped in the groove and blended in the backgrond, makes it nice and deep
thanks raph might look into adding a little sample in there
Originally posted by Raphie
Yep! The vibe is there, whats missing is a female ROLAND lick on the 2 and 4 and ehhmm or ooowhh or yeah, but chopped in the groove and blended in the backgrond, makes it nice and deep
Liking the swing on this, nice sounds overall. I would vary that 'woop - wuut' tom thing every 4th bar.
Add a little vocal morsel here n there to give it another push.
RAPHIE has mastered Clown, here it is, I wanted to post this up as a thanks to Raphie so people can get a sense of how he's improved it.
I notice now that an electrical click appeared in the break during my export, lol, oh well sorta adds to the track.
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Liking the swing on this, nice sounds overall. I would vary that 'woop - wuut' tom thing every 4th bar.
Add a little vocal morsel here n there to give it another push.
RAPHIE has mastered Clown, here it is, I wanted to post this up as a thanks to Raphie so people can get a sense of how he's improved it.
I notice now that an electrical click appeared in the break during my export, lol, oh well sorta adds to the track.
Now to find a label!
Not my cup of tea but definitely appreciate quality of this track Richard and with Raphie final touches/polishing of it sounds really good.
Darek
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Originally posted by evo8
another one from me - concentrating on percussion and groove
Have some nice Industrial flavor and pretty sweet vibe - it is all about what to do next with it will determinate future fate of this WIP - so far so good !!!
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As usual after hours spend in studio working on some commitments I end up going through some quick and funny track creation process as form of resetting my state of the mind lol - if you know what mean lol -> here is the result:
Nothing special, nothing pretty just letting my creativity flow lol
Cheers,
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
As usual after hours spend in studio working on some commitments I end up going through some quick and funny track creation process as form of resetting my state of the mind lol - if you know what mean lol -> here is the result:
Nothing special, nothing pretty just letting my creativity flow lol
Cheers,
Darek
That's not bad at all mate and it got me moving as it has a good groove and feel. At 1.38 you bring in some cheesey synth line, this totally spoils the track.
I would say don't put a clap on so many of the downbeats as it slightly detracts from the groove (I know some big festival tracks employ a clap like this but it suits that style).
Originally posted by Raphie
So finally a real WIP from me, I'm doing a remix of one of Calebs tracks and this is what i got so far:
I like the synths. The tribal toms thing is ok, but a bit GM sounding. Layer them up / play a few by hand loosely, vary them as at the mo they are too static and basic.
This track for me could use a change of note on the bass at some point to give that satisfying melodic release, and you need a better bassline anyway, something much more original and groovy. I know Raphie you hate over production and messed with tracks so maybe you will stick with what you've got.
Originally posted by TranceLover007
As usual after hours spend in studio working on some commitments I end up going through some quick and funny track creation process as form of resetting my state of the mind lol - if you know what mean lol -> here is the result:
Nothing special, nothing pretty just letting my creativity flow lol
Cheers,
Darek
the percussion is nice and jackin but the whole thing is just too cheesy for me!
Originally posted by Richard Butler
That's not bad at all mate and it got me moving as it has a good groove and feel. At 1.38 you bring in some cheesey synth line, this totally spoils the track.
I would say don't put a clap on so many of the downbeats as it slightly detracts from the groove (I know some big festival tracks employ a clap like this but it suits that style).
Cheers brother and appreciate your suggestion - will let this one go on shelf as I have too many commitments at the moment
Darek
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
I like the synths. The tribal toms thing is ok, but a bit GM sounding. Layer them up / play a few by hand loosely, vary them as at the mo they are too static and basic.
This track for me could use a change of note on the bass at some point to give that satisfying melodic release, and you need a better bassline anyway, something much more original and groovy. I know Raphie you hate over production and messed with tracks so maybe you will stick with what you've got.
I have a chord progression in the original. I had the same thought when I heard it but I think he is planning to add the progression in the part after the clip ends.
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