quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
I have to start taking criticism better as I was about to just say fuck it and ditch this track due to the fact it has been a 5 month project and VERY frustrating. Seeing your guys replies and me "thinking" it was ok,when it's not. So, yea...I guess you could say I do know what you are referencing.
So ::deep breath:: here is my reasoning (which is obviously wrong)
I was having SC issues where my kick would completely dissolve under the bass. At certain times,on certain notes the bass would swell so much it distorted. I was and am having issues being in the red already and since I am mixing on cans I felt that I may have had to much bass. So, I cut out some of the sub and the kick.
Now then...in my car I have an extremely good audio set up which is also treated. I use them for checking my mix (which I try to do on as many devices as possible anyway,this just being the pinnacle). IMHO, I felt it was pretty decent and still better than any of my other mixes. Guess, I am wrong.
Now then...the comment from TranceElevation about presence. I am unsure if we are referring to the same thing or not however, I did mention that I felt this track lacks conviction..I still feel that way. Please if you could explain your reasoning. |
So let me give you my perspective on this track -> love intro till 1:00 min mark, after that this raiser till 1:15 create little expectation for more driving and energetic part in your track end unfortunately wasn't there so for now I'm missing this driving force for this WIP and this would give you a lot of dynamics which you are missing right now - but let me tall you this 'first min is a class' so I would suggest (if I can) to work on your main part (like a 10 sec slice of your track) and glue it with you intro.
I really like this intro man, is really sweet.
Darek
___________________
I like that freedom with no boundaries, no restrictions, no rules setup by somebody else – it's only me and my music.
SoundCloud
MySpace
Facebook
DariusX Page
|