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TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA

quote:
Originally posted by Innocence Lost


I'm prob outta key like always but I have a crescendo melody at the end. I know there's no white noise or crashes and sweep, i'll add them later when i'm done.


Well, as far as intro concern -> nice work man even with all of those bass lines layers lol but I would expect (around 1:25 mark) to finally hear some melodic development being created. I think I just know your main weakness man, it is creating a melodic part/s in your work - so at this point don't know how to help you man as this probably "the must have" thing in music production, your "ears" are your "eyes" in really live, without it you can exist but it is not an easy road to take - if you know what I mean, but remember "never give up" man as lots of things you can learn to be good in

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Mr.Mystery
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Here's a clip of something I'm pretty excited about...


So this happened:
http://classic.beatport.com/release...sunrise/1530630


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Innocence Lost
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Well, as far as intro concern -> nice work man even with all of those bass lines layers lol but I would expect (around 1:25 mark) to finally hear some melodic development being created. I think I just know your main weakness man, it is creating a melodic part/s in your work - so at this point don't know how to help you man as this probably "the must have" thing in music production, your "ears" are your "eyes" in really live, without it you can exist but it is not an easy road to take - if you know what I mean, but remember "never give up" man as lots of things you can learn to be good in

Darek


Thank you Darek, what if I add hints of the crescendo melody at the 1:25 My ears are telling me the same thing. One thing I noticed is that the climax has no support through out the whole intro. I wonder if it will be final ingredient, cheers. I'll post my opinion on your work asap.

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TranceLover007
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Originally posted by Zak McKracken
....... breaks are for pussys. "climaxes" too. .........


Oh man, you just ruined my day

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Originally posted by Innocence Lost
Thank you Darek, what if I add hints of the crescendo melody at the 1:25 My ears are telling me the same thing. One thing I noticed is that the climax has no support through out the whole intro. I wonder if it will be final ingredient, cheers. I'll post my opinion on your work asap.


Try it man, nothing worst then "I don't really like it" can happen lol

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Last edited by TranceLover007 on May-18-2015 at 20:06

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TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
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quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
So this happened:
http://classic.beatport.com/release...sunrise/1530630


Congrats man, nice release, me like it.

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Oh man, you just ruined my day

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TranceLover007
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So, after some thought about my older track "Babylon" (lol some of you guys know about it) I finally decided to rework it massively as I wasn't particularly happy about progression and melodic vibe in it.

Also since I 'm participating in this thread right from beginning I decided to upload and share with you guys my progress before it hits the street - some vocal parts are from Amy and my track "Hearts on Fire" which should be out soon also.



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Originally posted by TranceLover007
So, after some thought about my older track "Babylon" (lol some of you guys know about it) I finally decided to rework it massively as I wasn't particularly happy about progression and melodic vibe in it.

Also since I 'm participating in this thread right from beginning I decided to upload and share with you guys my progress before it hits the street - some vocal parts are from Amy and my track "Hearts on Fire" which should be out soon also.



Darek


Aww I'm really liking this. Reminds me deadmau5 of faxing berlin bass. Mix down is very nice and when the vocals come its just hits the spot, great arrangement. Good job on this one bro.



Made some adjustments. It was more complex on making the parts so i guess what it takes to sound unique.

Shux I pushed a key during exportation LOL.

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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
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quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
So, after some thought about my older track "Babylon" (lol some of you guys know about it) I finally decided to rework it massively as I wasn't particularly happy about progression and melodic vibe in it.

Also since I 'm participating in this thread right from beginning I decided to upload and share with you guys my progress before it hits the street - some vocal parts are from Amy and my track "Hearts on Fire" which should be out soon also.



Darek



This is for me your best track, everything is good and well done, nice vocal stabs etc, nice flow, now you are 'danger' man in 'commercial field', lol.

You tend to keep the bass to an offset which really helps with a nice mix I think. One or two of the white noise sweeps are slightly loud.
Lovely synth work.


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Made some adjustments.



Around 1.38 a very 'middy / muddy' sound is introduced which is swamping what was a clear mix.

Looking forward to seeing where to take it melody wise. Watch the click on your arp there.


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cryophonik
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Registered: Jan 2008
Location: Elk Grove, CA USA

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
So, after some thought about my older track "Babylon" (lol some of you guys know about it) I finally decided to rework it massively as I wasn't particularly happy about progression and melodic vibe in it.

Also since I 'm participating in this thread right from beginning I decided to upload and share with you guys my progress before it hits the street - some vocal parts are from Amy and my track "Hearts on Fire" which should be out soon also.

Darek


I don't think I ever heard the previous version(s), but I like this one a lot (and, no not just because of Amie). Her vocal sample is cool, although it will be very recognizable once Hearts on Fire is released - not sure that it's a problem, though, just sayin'. Anyway, cool groove, nice mix. No crits here. Definitely one of my favorites from you, Darek.


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