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SynthNinja
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quote:
Originally posted by DJ RANN
This is actually a really nicely produced start of a track. I love this type of shit. I'd pull back on the kick though too; don't pay attention to numbers, they're meaningless. Just do it by ear so it doesn't cloud the mid freq you have going on there.


Awwl Thank You Rann, it really means a lot to me, cheers my man.

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evo8
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Originally posted by gordan100
It's an idea



i like the sound but kick doesnt really fit for me, the bass/pad/synths are very loud and wide
i thought if you brought the kick level up that might help but maybe the whole drums might need to be mixed better

really like the idea though


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SystematicX1
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This is an odd one for me but I keep working on it.
*2:26 and beyond is just experimental composition,not sure if it is going anywhere which is stumping me the most.

Could use some advice on this as I am not sure to scrap it or keep working it (and advice with)


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SynthNinja
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quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
This is an odd one for me but I keep working on it.
*2:26 and beyond is just experimental composition,not sure if it is going anywhere which is stumping me the most.

Could use some advice on this as I am not sure to scrap it or keep working it (and advice with)



I'm liking this, the idea is really good but needs more work, it does sound close to an original concept thats been done before which is some what pleasing nonetheless.

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SystematicX1
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Originally posted by SynthNinja
I'm liking this, the idea is really good but needs more work, it does sound close to an original concept thats been done before which is some what pleasing nonetheless.


Thanks! Cleaned er up a bit


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SynthNinja
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Thanks! Cleaned er up a bit



Now you got yourself an original, way to go. I couldn't find anything I didn't like this time. Everything flowed smoothly.

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SystematicX1
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Now you got yourself an original, way to go. I couldn't find anything I didn't like this time. Everything flowed smoothly.

Thank You! Appreciate that. Oddly I found myself attached to that piece and it worked out


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SynthNinja
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Alright my Turney,

Masters of melodies, I need your help.

Does this have composition? or is it an A - Minor newb attempt of a track



Paaaalmmmm... Haaaallppp

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SystematicX1
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quote:
Originally posted by SynthNinja
Alright my Turney,

Masters of melodies, I need your help.

Does this have composition? or is it an A - Minor newb attempt of a track



Paaaalmmmm... Haaaallppp


I dig this. I reaally do.
@2:23 This transition made me feel as if you started deviating a bit in a off tone bass layer. It actually isn't a bad transition tbh but it made me feel as though I was listening to a DJ set rather than a produced composition.

Beautiful transit period 2:50-4:00

04:12 - There it is again...there is something underlying and I cannot tell if it is your sub and mid range going off on a different note or tonality.

If I had any other critique it would have to be in the kick area. Never been a fan of that flat tone kick but I understand and know a lot who do. Total creative choice

Nice track man


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SynthNinja
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quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
I dig this. I reaally do.
@2:23 This transition made me feel as if you started deviating a bit in a off tone bass layer. It actually isn't a bad transition tbh but it made me feel as though I was listening to a DJ set rather than a produced composition.

Beautiful transit period 2:50-4:00

04:12 - There it is again...there is something underlying and I cannot tell if it is your sub and mid range going off on a different note or tonality.

If I had any other critique it would have to be in the kick area. Never been a fan of that flat tone kick but I understand and know a lot who do. Total creative choice

Nice track man


Thanks System, will look into this and see what I can do.

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evo8
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quote:
Originally posted by SynthNinja
Alright my Turney,

Masters of melodies, I need your help.

Does this have composition? or is it an A - Minor newb attempt of a track



Paaaalmmmm... Haaaallppp


huge improvement, havent heard any of your stuff in a couple of years probably

suggestions: 1. dont compress so much, let the track breathe and groove
2. you gotta go big after the breakdown, maybe open the filter on the arp a bit more, or stretch the notes out slightly longer, or maybe a bit more reverb after the break
drop doesnt grab me at the moment, not sure about that pad that comes in

also your bass goes a bit wonky at the end for some reason?

p.s. the saw arp that comes in near the end - thats what you should put after the drop

good stuff


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SynthNinja
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Originally posted by evo8
huge improvement, havent heard any of your stuff in a couple of years probably

suggestions: 1. dont compress so much, let the track breathe and groove
2. you gotta go big after the breakdown, maybe open the filter on the arp a bit more, or stretch the notes out slightly longer, or maybe a bit more reverb after the break
drop doesnt grab me at the moment, not sure about that pad that comes in

also your bass goes a bit wonky at the end for some reason?

p.s. the saw arp that comes in near the end - thats what you should put after the drop

good stuff


Aye thanx Evo. Your def right about going big at breakdown, all in and all out and I wasn't comfortable with stretching notes an octave or two at the time, but that was then, this is now and I'm ready to make another track.

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