Originally posted by evo8
any opinions (good or bad) on this one?
Like this blend of Techno/Industrial elements in this short WIP - as far as whats next? - I would say you can add some more melodic parts sweeping through your track or add more Industrial FX to emphasize Techno/Industrial riff/groove.
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Originally posted by martinleblanc
I really like your track - if you EQ it correct, and use a compressor better you would have a really great track. Did you do it in Logic Pro? Would you be interested in letting me remix it?
Oh sorry I don't use logic and TY all for the feedback, very helpful. Will try come back with an improved mix of my song ^^
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Jan-11-2014 13:03
Richard Butler
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Here's a hard club WIP, I think I'm done with it bar mixing, do you think remove the vocals?
EDIT - I'm re-doing this, it's crap.
Last edited by Richard Butler on Jan-12-2014 at 11:40
Jan-11-2014 23:54
theterran
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Location: Texass
Haven't been on here in ages...Thought I'd drop by and throw up something new I've been workin' on. Gettin' into that darker vibe lately.
Jan-12-2014 01:39
Richard Butler
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Location: London
quote:
Originally posted by theterran
Haven't been on here in ages...Thought I'd drop by and throw up something new I've been workin' on. Gettin' into that darker vibe lately.
A good piece for me, quite evocative.
The offset main bass is a little woody, I'd maybe scoop out some of the low resonant woody area.
Jan-12-2014 11:43
theterran
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Not sure what "woody" means I'm afraid. :S
A guess though is that it's modeled off a deep Moog Square bass, and you're hearing the "Squareness". It's nothing frequency dipping or gouging would get rid of and the bass would need changing entirely. Do kinda like the hint of square for the punch, and it translates quite well onto a sub-woofer.
Cheers for the listen and feedback <3.
Last edited by theterran on Jan-12-2014 at 17:08
Jan-12-2014 17:00
Richard Butler
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Location: London
So I re did my 'hard' club track, it's just about finished for once. I quite like the simplicity but as it's still a WIP I'm open eared if any changes needed.
Terran I deffo ddn#t mean squarey I meant woody - probably around the 200-400 hz range.
Jan-12-2014 23:20
Trancelover03591
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Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California
quote:
Originally posted by theterran
Haven't been on here in ages...Thought I'd drop by and throw up something new I've been workin' on. Gettin' into that darker vibe lately.
Sounds great to me, nothing I can really suggest to change.
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
So I re did my 'hard' club track, it's just about finished for once. I quite like the simplicity but as it's still a WIP I'm open eared if any changes needed.
Terran I deffo ddn#t mean squarey I meant woody - probably around the 200-400 hz range.
Cool track. I probably call it techno myself.
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I've been into Psy for a while now, been working on this track
for a while, it's a remix ...not final master
this one is 11 rms , the final one is 8rms
