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djshire
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Registered: Dec 2010
Location: Detroit, MI, USA
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quote: | Originally posted by optik
I think you've got to take a listen to some more anjunadeep stuff - anjunadeep one and two are quite frankly classics of the genre and showcase the most unbelievably produced, melodic tracks.
My advice is to really listen to the vocal sample that is provided, that gives clues about the musical direction.
your bass and padds are out of key with each other - try pitching the bass down by 9 (or up by 3)
the percussion programming is rather sparse, needs more variation.
Musically, this is all over the place mate - I'm not being harsh, just suggesting some music practice or maybe some piano lessons.
That said I really like the bit at 4:40 to about 4:50 - you could bass a track around this.
sorry to not be more positive |
Harsh was what I was looking for. I need a lot of work. Again, this was rushed so it doesn't sound as polished as it could be. I may learn piano from Garageband. I also need to learn music theory. The percussion was a sample, a loop, so I learned that I am best not using loops but using individual parts for more programability. And that little section.....yea, it felt out of place, but I wanted something "happy" sounding, so I might use that in something else in the future.
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Apr-21-2014 00:29
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Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
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Apr-21-2014 00:53
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Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
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mix sounds good. bassline nice n punchy. the piano in the breakdown could be brought up closer and more forward in the mix. the chord progession and arp is spot on for trance. reminds me of alan-m's stuff back in the day. the one thing that does stick out is how buried the piano is in the mix.
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Apr-21-2014 01:54
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Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
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quote: | Originally posted by PaULiN0
Here's an experimental break track I'm making,
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kick is super boxy, snare isn't really connecting, percs, everything all over the place. no real groove to speak of. just all over the place.
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Apr-21-2014 02:07
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Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver
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it sounds better. it kinda seems like the piano notes just need to be an octave hire. instrumentally and musically you have the mids, the higher octave piano might sit a lot better. either way it works pretty well.
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Apr-21-2014 04:04
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