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Seandroid
Banned
Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Edmonton, Alberta
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Nov-19-2013 18:54
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TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
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quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
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Sean, we will need to work on it in sequence as I would like to spend enough time (and pay attention to every detail) on every little thing.
This will need to be a conversation back and fort between (and I'm hoping that more people will join us in this) you and me
Let start with intro till 0:30 min - sound really good man , I wouldn't change anything at all (like depth and sound of it).
0:30 min part till 1:30 (actually this has two parts, one with past intro at 0:30 till 1:00 and second pre-main part at 1:00 till 1:30) - this is the one I would like to tweak a bit (and remember this is only from my perspective or my view for this track). Beyond those main chords you are playing (which as long as you believe they are the "one") on your piano, I would try to improve sounds of it (a bit more crispness and dynamics or maybe a clarity like sound from live piano, could give in a good reference), also those sweeps sound effect which cames with every piano chords changes are need to be a bit more prominent with massive but quick cutoff on this end of the sweep) - if you know what I mean?
Part 1:00 I would like to hear more crispier bass sound, more aggressive and sharp to slowly prep everything for your main 1:30 part - which sounds really good at the moment (tho I would also hear more crisp and aggressive sounds of those interplaying bass lines).
Give me your take on my suggestions so far and we will take another step after that.
Cheers man,
Darek
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Nov-19-2013 20:26
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Domesty
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Registered: Oct 2011
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quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
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I have to agree whit DariusX on the intro part. Even though melody vise im not familiar whit the sound good so far. The morphing bass is nice, but i think if you narrowed some elements down to get more room for your piano keys or add little dynamic to them (fe. putting them more to the stereo and possible add more fx?). Plus the lead on 3:30 seems to be too high on mids/mid-lows.
Just some toughts. (:
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Nov-19-2013 21:21
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