Originally posted by Andy28
Tried to post this last night but soundcloud wouldn't upload for some reason?
Some uplifting trance I was working on all day yesterday..
Let me know what you think,
Cheers
yeah, bit of a grower this one, wasnt sure at first on the progression - good job
theres a lot of noise in mix somewhere, id back off on that a bit Andy
also in little breakdowns, i would loop the first 2 bars, dont go into the full progression...just build the fuck out of it and then drop it back in
oh that bit after the final break is really good, sounds really clean, i can hear the bass now - its getting swamped earlier, i think the culprit is some pad or something - keep the pad in but try and EQ it so its not blocking the bassline?
yeah thats my advices , reminds me of Diving Faces a bit - i wouldnt mind having a go at mixing this Andy if your up for that!
Originally posted by Andy28
Tried to post this last night but soundcloud wouldn't upload for some reason?
Some uplifting trance I was working on all day yesterday..
Let me know what you think,
Cheers
Andy, couple of things which I will try to do before I would go on shopping with this track:
1. I would keep this chords from 7th bar till the 8th bar.
2. in 1:09 (or at least 1:33) I would introduce another instrument (best would be piano) playing some sweet melodic part for more attractiveness.
The rest sound good so far
Darek
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here is my latest collab with Carlos and Amy (vocal) - still in concept stage but melody and vocal placement is already there.
Please give it try and let me know if you enjoy it
Darek
Nice mixing, but the chorus is not distinguishable from the intro / verses because you sort of just continue the synth sounds and lines. Slightly euro pop / Eurovision so unlikely to hit the spot in terms of EDM.
Originally posted by Andy28
Tried to post this last night but soundcloud wouldn't upload for some reason?
Some uplifting trance I was working on all day yesterday..
Let me know what you think,
Cheers
Really nice Andy, liking those wide subtle synths. IMO it could be better still with slightly more imaginative note placement for the leed as in parts it's a bit repetitive.
Originally posted by evo8
havent posted anything in a while - this is in the new room so its gonna take me a while to get things translating correctly
Great grove and mixing. I want it to really pound from about 40 secs, but it stays a bit static. I personally do not like the drop as the pads spoil the excellent grove and space.
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Nice mixing, but the chorus is not distinguishable from the intro / verses because you sort of just continue the synth sounds and lines. Slightly euro pop / Eurovision so unlikely to hit the spot in terms of EDM.
Oh man, you are really getting old - just have a bit of faith in me Richard, lol just kidding, this will sound good on the end of the day
Cheers brother,
Darek
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my WIP track
Been working on this one a bit, worth finishing? Mixing quality is probably horrible since I'm in a big living room with hardwood floors and no treatment so I do a lot of it via headphones. Looking mostly for feedback on the construction of the song itself, melody, development, etc. but any and all feedback welcome!
Last edited by Katella on Apr-10-2015 at 05:25
Apr-10-2015 05:20
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Apr-10-2015 06:56
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quote:
Originally posted by Andy28
Tried to post this last night but soundcloud wouldn't upload for some reason?
Some uplifting trance I was working on all day yesterday..
Let me know what you think,
Cheers
I like this.
After the suggestion that were made here, I post the updates I made.
Registered: Jun 2008
Location: Lelystad, Netherlands
Sounds good andy28, i would adjust the bassline progression a bit so that the 2nd part differs from the first, as a harmony if you will but further great start.
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Apr-10-2015 16:06
Raphie
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Mise, your drumloops sound weird? Not tight? Some timstretching issues?
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Apr-10-2015 16:07
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007, nice vocals i find the backing trackma bit to "well behaved / safe" may be a bit more outspoken to my taste
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