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AlphaStarred
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Brooklyn, NY
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quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
I'd say that track is pretty perfect Alpha, nice work. |
Thanks, dude. Wasn't sure about structure and a few other things, doing it live again, but I guess I'll leave it and move on.
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Revision 2: its still incoherent, doesnt make sense and has no flow. Gonna rest on this one for a bit. |
As I mentioned before, I still like the beginning and now that you developed it a bit more, I like it even more. It's relatively simple, but has a nice flow...although I'm still not sure about the synth that comes in after 1:30 or so. It may work, but perhaps introduce it in a better way? Not sure. If you're feeling stuck, resting on it may not be a bad idea, or just finish it.
Last edited by AlphaStarred on May-05-2016 at 23:13
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May-05-2016 23:08
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