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Hides in Shadow
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Sep-19-2019 18:53
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gordan100
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quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'm working on this one, any thoughts so far?
The image is of a stream and waterfall I recently built that was bare dirt, so there..lol
Got add something to that first break
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It's a really cool groove and i love sound selection
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Sep-20-2019 20:48
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gordan100
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Sep-20-2019 20:56
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gordan100
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Thanks for that example and advices, Phil. I have tried to add more highend and clarity on voice but it started to pierce my ears, so i've pulled it back. I'll give it another go. Also, vocal was recorded on some really cheap mic, low on volume, so i needed to give him a boost with amplifier but then a nasty lowend buzz came in. I should probably record vocals again on a better mic
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Sep-21-2019 14:26
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gordan100
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It's a nice melody and groove, i don't think you need more elements
i would though cut from 1:16 - 2:28, i think that track develops too slowly
Those plucks starts at 2:52 are nice. You could maybe make a full break with them and bassline at 3:16 and then introduce piano and drums again and do some small variations on plucks. Just my thoughts
btw. you are very good in many genres
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Sep-22-2019 22:21
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Sep-23-2019 22:52
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