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Hi Richard
its good to be back doing some music again
cool track! I think the first "thats not funny" is too dry maybe the whole track could do with more reverb imo
the fx at 1:00 like a reverse vocal fx is really cool how did you do that?
im Listening on my laptop and headphones, but the bass sounds banging, the fx are really cool and keep it interesting. Pretty warped!
I feel like the track could do with a nice big 909 ride on the off beat personally to help it chug along, or a bit more hi hats/percussion but that may just be me.
Heres my WIP. The mix is still rough and bear in mind its going to have vocals so I've deliberately left space etc
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Firstly the mix is great and I really like the sound choices. The snare is spot on, I can never find nice acoustic (semi acoustic) open metallic snares like that.
I really dig the bass when it's played normally, but when it goes dubbish and reverse it does not sit well and disturbs the enjoyment, plus mate without wanting to sound like a dick that classic whooping bass is a bit over done, so personally I stick more with the normally enveloped bass with only the odd variation in sound such as the odd 'massive' growl or whatever.
Looking forward to see how the vocals go.
Thanks for the feedback on my track.
Yes I will work on some of the vocals to make them have more impact and will consider the ride cymbals.
I have some other changes to make so it keeps the interest better. Glad you felt the bass is ok, this for me is my biggest issue as I do not have great monitoring.
Once I've got this track finished, over to Raphie for some analogue goodness. I've released quirky tracks like this before (PS I did not send to you Story teller as it is not your style in terms of the main thrust of your label.
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