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gordan100
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Registered: Apr 2011
Location: Zagreb, Croatia
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quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's an EDM style track - could you tell me if it would be better with more vocals?
Are the 2 rises out of the breaks good enough?
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I like the vibe and how it sounds - until 1:00 mark... I would base song on sound in that part + some good bassline or strings that would change key or something. It goes too much pop, and stabby open synth later for me. And structure is confusing, you've added too much stuff, still have no contrast, so it get's repetitive fast, imo.
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Oct-10-2016 14:45
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evo8
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Registered: Aug 2004
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quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's an EDM style track - could you tell me if it would be better with more vocals?
Are the 2 rises out of the breaks good enough?
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Rich im not an EDM fan but this sounds good, i clicked play and instantly thought "EDM", thats before i read the comment
i think that you are almost changing the structure too much, you need to let some bits just loop a bit more, absolutely no harm in that, otherwise people just cant get into the groove as it keeps changing
e.g 4:13 onwards, i feel you could loop those first 2 bars again - then maybe throw in your change in the next loop around? but i understand if thats the style you intend!
vox - i dont think this needs any, better without imo
break at 2 mins, thats too long imo for that point in the track
leading into the main break you could send some of the main synth to a big delay, let that wash out whilst bringing the main synth back up
also not sure the pre-drop works the best (snares) - id try a synth stutter, like playing your main synth loop whilst progressively shortening the loop points (old djm600 trick)
sorry, i wrote too much. your kicks have good depth now (finally )
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Oct-10-2016 20:31
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