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evo8
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quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
It is just a WIP for vocal recording so I will have to completely rely on your artistic imagination as in the future a soft female voice will be a big part of this track/song. Another thing is that some of the transitions or parts of this track will be definitely polish and massage much more then it is right now

Give it a run and tell me if this melodic development is catching your attention

Cheers,

Darek

DariusX - "LOVE PERCEPTION" (WIP for Vocal Recording) by DariusX.


sorry Darek, the melody isnt really doing it for me, a little too "nice" for want of a better description, wouldnt be gone on the percussion/groove either


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chris marsh
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Agreed Evo. This tread has been awesome, but people cant expect to get feedback without giving a bit back too


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Originally posted by TranceLover007
It is just a WIP for vocal recording so I will have to completely rely on your artistic imagination as in the future a soft female voice will be a big part of this track/song. Another thing is that some of the transitions or parts of this track will be definitely polish and massage much more then it is right now

Give it a run and tell me if this melodic development is catching your attention

Cheers,

Darek

DariusX - "LOVE PERCEPTION" (WIP for Vocal Recording) by DariusX.



Hi Derek

hope you are good

i like this, nice arpeggiated chord sequence and i like the stings underneath, could have some lovely vox on top could be nice imo!

i think the kick could be much stronger, and you could also do with some kind of sub in there imo to drive things along. I think the low end in general could do with a bit of attention. I useful thing for me is to low pass a reference track then low pass your own i find that helpful anyway

perhaps you could also have some more subtle layers on top of the synths to make things sparkle a bit more??

Chris


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Originally posted by Dj_Kile
Hi guys, been a while since I've been active

I've been into Psy for a while now, been working on this track
for a while, it's a remix ...not final master
this one is 11 rms , the final one is 8rms

what you think ?




this sounds really tight to me at the start. i love the beats and bass and one of the pluck synths too

i find the drop at 3.00 a bit of a let down an im not keen on the filter mod synth here either, i think the theres a bit too much sidechain or filter modulation on the off beats going on overall and i would like to see it go in a more defined direction.

Imo it could be really awesome with some work

Only my humble opinion, i know nothing about psy trance at all btw so defo take with apinch of salt


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Hi guys

I got a much better mic and re recorded the singer (still a cheap preamp mind you)

Still needs fx and fills and finishing touches

If i was doing it again i would get the double tracking tighter

any critical feedback gratefully received

This is the first tune ie made in this style but enjoying so far

Chris


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I got a much better mic and re recorded the singer (still a cheap preamp mind you)

Sounds good, mixwise. Definitely needs more background stuff, and not just fx. Alot of instruments would fit in this kind of music.


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Here is a remix I just did. Any advice? tips? criticism?

Yuck, the track is very cheesy, consider redesigning the synths and spicing up the melodies, it all sounds a bit simple.


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Hi guys

I got a much better mic and re recorded the singer (still a cheap preamp mind you)

Still needs fx and fills and finishing touches

If i was doing it again i would get the double tracking tighter

any critical feedback gratefully received

This is the first tune ie made in this style but enjoying so far

Chris


i kinda detest this type of music but the mixing sounds good to me


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chris marsh
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quote:
Originally posted by evo8
i kinda detest this type of music but the mixing sounds good to me


lolz yup its a bit cheesy i guess, just experimenting with different styles atm


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quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
It is just a WIP for vocal recording so I will have to completely rely on your artistic imagination as in the future a soft female voice will be a big part of this track/song. Another thing is that some of the transitions or parts of this track will be definitely polish and massage much more then it is right now

Give it a run and tell me if this melodic development is catching your attention

Cheers,

Darek

DariusX - "LOVE PERCEPTION" (WIP for Vocal Recording) by DariusX.


I like it - it's something different. I can't tell but it feel like some of the percussion elements aren't in tune with the song. Maybe try tuning them?


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Hi guys

I got a much better mic and re recorded the singer (still a cheap preamp mind you)

Still needs fx and fills and finishing touches

If i was doing it again i would get the double tracking tighter

any critical feedback gratefully received

This is the first tune ie made in this style but enjoying so far

Chris


Kind of generic vocal house to me, but sounds really quality in terms of production.


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Made this ambient track, thoughts?:


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Made this ambient track, thoughts?:




Nice atmosphere and musicality, no crits.

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