Welp, posted this WIP a few weeks ago and it has changed quite a bit.
There are some evident pieces missing as I am still working on it but could use some feedback on production.
After viewing that Steve duda video and him talking about Eq'ing, I went with his opinion and made some changes. Not sure if it is elevating the mix or not.
I also took a little different compositional approach. Im wondering if it is screwy on the ears
Any ears with this greatly appreciated.
Originally posted by SystematicX1
Welp, posted this WIP a few weeks ago and it has changed quite a bit.
There are some evident pieces missing as I am still working on it but could use some feedback on production.
After viewing that Steve duda video and him talking about Eq'ing, I went with his opinion and made some changes. Not sure if it is elevating the mix or not.
I also took a little different compositional approach. Im wondering if it is screwy on the ears
Any ears with this greatly appreciated.
Sorry man, can't work on this MixCloud lol as is not cooperating with me, every time I try to move player forward or backward I got some strange error massage: "Due to licensing issues in your country it is not possible to seek backwards." - also every time I'm reloading this page this player starts to play your track from the time I stop it right before reload - you have got to love this
Darek
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Yep, Thanks Darek. I'll have to re upload due to now Mixcloud is only allowing mixed and not single tracks. ::rolls eyes::
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May-01-2015 19:45
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
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Originally posted by SystematicX1
Yep, Thanks Darek. I'll have to re upload due to now Mixcloud is only allowing mixed and not single tracks. ::rolls eyes::
Yeah, sorry man - but I started to like your work lol
Darek
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Originally posted by evo8
snip of some more deeper stuff
Evo, that IS some deep shit...dig that vibe. After that drop you left yourself open to the progression of the track which is a good thing. I instantly thought of a phat bassline to it. Sorta housey. But believe it deserves something big in the bass area.
I should mention that the first minute seems muddy to me. Is there a pass on it? Or is that on a single track, or is there no pass at all.
As well, the atmosphere could use a little mixing up,almost seems like its overtaking your rhythm.
Nice vibe dood..want to hear more
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Ok,sorry for the repeat. Mixcloud is now a distant memory to me and those issue resolved.
So...brief recap. New remix...did some things I just never did before along the lines of EQ (I still think I'm failing in that dept.) as well as composition.
The problem I have with this track (as I do with each track I make) is it is sounding better because I have tried following Duda's comment on EQ,which basically is "cutting out sound". This is seemingly more clearer to understand now,however..I am lacking dynamics which I so desire to be able to achieve. Is it better than my last track...yea,but it lacks...conviction...lol
It is almost done but has some noticeable areas needing work or just plain missing.
Any ear lending is and always appreciated.
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May-02-2015 07:14
Richard Butler
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
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Originally posted by SystematicX1
Any ear lending is and always appreciated.
Some real nice work around 47 - 56, this is the backbone of the track for me, but it somehow goes awry in terms of drums and is hard to get into !
Just stick with that core part and add some nice drums and go from there.
Originally posted by SystematicX1
Evo, that IS some deep shit...dig that vibe. After that drop you left yourself open to the progression of the track which is a good thing. I instantly thought of a phat bassline to it. Sorta housey. But believe it deserves something big in the bass area.
I should mention that the first minute seems muddy to me. Is there a pass on it? Or is that on a single track, or is there no pass at all.
As well, the atmosphere could use a little mixing up,almost seems like its overtaking your rhythm.
Nice vibe dood..want to hear more
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Ok,sorry for the repeat. Mixcloud is now a distant memory to me and those issue resolved.
So...brief recap. New remix...did some things I just never did before along the lines of EQ (I still think I'm failing in that dept.) as well as composition.
The problem I have with this track (as I do with each track I make) is it is sounding better because I have tried following Duda's comment on EQ,which basically is "cutting out sound". This is seemingly more clearer to understand now,however..I am lacking dynamics which I so desire to be able to achieve. Is it better than my last track...yea,but it lacks...conviction...lol
It is almost done but has some noticeable areas needing work or just plain missing.
Any ear lending is and always appreciated.
Main problem is kick has about 0 thump at the moment
edit: everything else pretty well mixed, has that loud "modern trance" sound if you will
Originally posted by evo8
snip of some more deeper stuff
Nice ambient sounds again man.
Perhaps you could make a couple for this track here as I think the piano should be faded down here n there and some other sounds come in. I cant make as good sounds as you at the mo!;
- also every time I'm reloading this page this player starts to play your track from the time I stop it right before reload 
- you have got to love this 
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