|Originally posted by The Dark NINJA |
Lovely sound in the intro: spacy pad, groovy shakers, cool kick, growly roller bass. The sub is maybe a little too siney for how high you're playing it? The vocal sample right now is just irritating... if you want to give the song a speech hook, you may need to focus one one memorable bit and make that more distinguishable perhaps, not play it so continuously? It's kind of hard to listen "around" the speech, but I think I like the percussion you have. The breakdown feels like the tune is ending, maybe you can start the buildup to the next bit while you're fading out and not after everything is gone (if there IS a next bit)? When the piano sets in, it's like a completely different track. The whole atmosphere is different, reverb space, bass character, melodic feel etc. The low line without the top does not work. Not sure what exactly you're doing there at the end
Here's my latest: rolling tech house and laid-back progressive trance
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