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SystematicX1
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quote:
Originally posted by Rodri Santos
Hey cryo, i see the regular lurkers around... nice. I still use a pack you made of open hats...

This is my new one if someone can suggest some changes before polishing.



Hi Rodri,
Judging the time span on a reply to this track I am assuming you have it already finished,sorry about that. It seems our board is getting a little lazy on the new year =OP
As for the critique on this track. Your arrangement has some very progressive tones to it. I very much like the pads and the "ohhs" balance. Sounds lush.
The Arp is nice on this but almost sounds out of place imo and I am one of those who are always saying "Throw An Arp on it". It just seems almost like the composition of notes make it seem "circusy". Especially the second and third root notes. Not sure if you are trying to follow the base notes as compensation but it renders it almost...off.
Dig the bass and tonality of the production. Has some nice areas in the mix that are just really pleasant sounding.
Overall, I appreciate the production on this track it just sounds a little wonky to me.


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Pretty much done with this one, need a final mix and master so the volume is a little low. Could use some production feedback if needed or what not.


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Richard Butler
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Pretty much done with this one, need a final mix and master so the volume is a little low. Could use some production feedback if needed or what not.



Nicely done mate I think that's a wrap, has a vibe I can really get

Sorry been busy lately, but here is a techno track I'm not far off finishing



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gordan100
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New stuff...



This is nice, i like it, nice sounds, intro is the weakest part though imo


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I didn't made anything for a while. This needs a little arrangement makeup i guess


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Richard Butler
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Decent chilled vibe my friend, nice


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Richard Butler
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Completed track called PANDEMIX

Just sending out

Keep well all


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SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Las Vegas

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Completed track called PANDEMIX

Just sending out

Keep well all



Whats up ya'll! Bout damn time you guys start posting tracks,jeez. This isolation HAS to draw out some influence somehow,right?
Glad to see ya back gents, now to it...

Pandemix!! LOL Love that and seems suitable.
Dig this Richard, very pulsing and a direct punch. I would say that if there was anything that I could critique is on that kick. At first I didn't feel it was a good tone but changed my opinion. It isn't that it is not a good tone but rather it needs another element, it needs that big huge booming sub underneath. Add that and a solid mix and you have got a really nice techno piece there.

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I didn't made anything for a while. This needs a little arrangement makeup i guess



Hey Gordan!
This track has a good idea in form. I would like to mention that the Arp is very prevalent here when it feels like it should be more underlying as an accompaniment. In ways it would appear that your bassline is the leader of this piece and the Arp is kind of taking up his space.
Curious if there is any sidechain compression on your bassline with that kick. I highly suggest that as it would probably sit a little better in the mix and make that more of a pronounced tone (and will probably bring that kick out more to)
Overall good stuff dood!


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(not trance....AT ALL Prepare for incoming pop cheese)
::scratches head and wonders why he did this track::


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TranceLover007
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Originally posted by SystematicX1
(not trance....AT ALL Prepare for incoming pop cheese)
::scratches head and wonders why he did this track::



Has nice vibe to it man and I would definitely finalize it with your main focus on area of the dynamics, let me know if this make any sense so I can point you in the right direction.

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My one of the few WIP at the moment

This is my latest WIP work in the area of Funk/Nu (also for Phil to see where the dynamics level should be).

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Richard Butler
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Has nice vibe to it man and I would definitely finalize it with your main focus on area of the dynamics, let me know if this make any sense so I can point you in the right direction.

Cheers,

Darek


Yes I think I'm with Dez, track needs more bounce & groove / dynamic impact even though pop but good work so far you soyboy!


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SystematicX1
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Has nice vibe to it man and I would definitely finalize it with your main focus on area of the dynamics, let me know if this make any sense so I can point you in the right direction.

Cheers,

Darek



Thanks guys for the listen. I am going to come right out and say that I totally know what you guys are referring to,and you are totally right. The issue I have is literally based on monitors I believe. I don't have any and what I am using is well..lol what you hear. Crap..lol
Or, would you disagree and say there are things I can do in helping my mixes without monitors


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Richard Butler
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Originally posted by SystematicX1
Thanks guys for the listen. I am going to come right out and say that I totally know what you guys are referring to,and you are totally right. The issue I have is literally based on monitors I believe. I don't have any and what I am using is well..lol what you hear. Crap..lol
Or, would you disagree and say there are things I can do in helping my mixes without monitors


I personally don't use monitors much, only now and then during a track, I just like producing on little Logitech computer speakers which I know a couple of big pro's also do.

A/B yours against some current electronic pop tracks - u just need a bit more 'peak' as my sons would say


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