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TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
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Just to add some life to this thread lol I will post my new (3~4hrs) WIP - this is an easy going take on vocal dance genre. What do you think? How everything seats together? How is this bass line? Is sounds balance properly?



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fuxzz
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This is really not my cup of tea but what could help you (from listener perspective) achieve higher level of satisfaction is to widen your sounds (at least some of the instruments and/or drums) as of right now this sound a bit flat and centric focus (I can hear that some Fx are pushed to left or right but you would definitely benefit of spreading your sounds more around.

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Thanks. I'll take that into consideration, I've been messing about with the bass so already got a new version going.



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Just to add some life to this thread lol I will post my new (3~4hrs) WIP - this is an easy going take on vocal dance genre. What do you think? How everything seats together? How is this bass line? Is sounds balance properly?



Cheers,

Darek


Your track sounds clean as always. The bass is good in my opinion. I'm not sure about some of the FX, they are a little too sudden, in lack of a better word.

I can almost hear a big warm pad playing in the background, maybe could be something to ponder.

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Just to attract more people/views/responses on this thread lol - my new idea: short but you will get an idea


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SystematicX1
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quote:
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Just to attract more people/views/responses on this thread lol - my new idea: short but you will get an idea


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Darek


Hey Darek,

So...Liking the track. I especially like how your mids are setting with the sub on this. Not to fond of the guitar licks but that is just personal opinion. I am finding however that those short vocal stabs are really effective and works.


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🦉 I'm thinking that track should go more disco rather than house.

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Different idea I am working on


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quote:
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Just to attract more people/views/responses on this thread lol - my new idea: short but you will get an idea


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Phil, that sounds clean and solid, i like it

Darius, you sound like pro dude, that is very nice with a lot of details in composition and sound, serious stuff

This is not that serious, rather simple, also no drums yet just kick, also not really happy with bassline. Any potential here or trash bin?


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Phil, that sounds clean and solid, i like it

Darius, you sound like pro dude, that is very nice with a lot of details in composition and sound, serious stuff

This is not that serious, rather simple, also no drums yet just kick, also not really happy with bassline. Any potential here or trash bin?



Heya Gordan,
So this piece is quite nice. I do not think that there is anything necessarily wrong with the bassline but I do believe you could take on another feel.
As it stands the bass is acting like a stab that triggers on the main down beat. "If", you were to re arrange your note to not hit on the down beat but rather in between the downbeat of your kick following every kick thereafter you may see that you will gain a different type of "groove". This may help you with gaining more swing from your percussion.
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So, this cut is part 8 of a fourth variant attempt ::rolls eyes:: at a track that was initially started three years ago. For some reason I can't seem to ditch it and always come back because I think it has potential. Now, it seems at the very least I am gaining some gel with this. As it stands, this is really just a bed. Still need some top end melody


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gordan100
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Thanks Phil, i will try that bass notes rearrangement

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So, this cut is part 8 of a fourth variant attempt ::rolls eyes:: at a track that was initially started three years ago. For some reason I can't seem to ditch it and always come back because I think it has potential. Now, it seems at the very least I am gaining some gel with this. As it stands, this is really just a bed. Still need some top end melody



This is a nice drive so far, def worth more developing!


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TranceLover007
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Originally posted by gordan100
Phil, that sounds clean and solid, i like it

Darius, you sound like pro dude, that is very nice with a lot of details in composition and sound, serious stuff

This is not that serious, rather simple, also no drums yet just kick, also not really happy with bassline. Any potential here or trash bin?



Gordan,

So far it is very clean but simple and without any drums, it would be really hard to get any sense in which direction you would like to take this WIP - I would say work on it (at least on drums) to see if you can get results you will be happy with and post it over here again.

Cheers,

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quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
So, this cut is part 8 of a fourth variant attempt ::rolls eyes:: at a track that was initially started three years ago. For some reason I can't seem to ditch it and always come back because I think it has potential. Now, it seems at the very least I am gaining some gel with this. As it stands, this is really just a bed. Still need some top end melody



Phil,

I can here why you always coming back to this Techno track man, has something catchy in it, but I can put my fingers on it yet, so I would suggest to work on your EQ first to get your dynamics in place - it makes huge difference (at least for me) if I work on some new material and doesn't move me at all then goes to bin lol. Drums+bass then start to adding additional elements to it, but punch/dynamics needs to be there man - just my $ 0.02

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Darek


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