Originally posted by Viber
I like it, i'm one of those pricks who listen to the dub version of every release so not so sure how much i like female vocals throughout the entire thing but the track itself is real nice imo.
Kinda reminds me of that 2004ish ISOS music that i liked so much, good not too overbearing music.
I like the 2nd track, though that hat is a bit annoying (maybe its just too loud.
your right, i need to lower the volume of that hat, thanks
Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Time for breakdown.
Looks like nobody is willing to take on this WIP from you Juan lol so let be the first one and start with this: at this point I think you have your most promising and interesting concept developed so far (out of so many you posted over here) but there is still a lots of room for improvement (at least from my perspective ).
I would start first with this observation -> base line is too loose and wondering too much around your whole WIP. I would either increase loudness of the existing mid-range one (which comes around 0:32) or add additional mid-range one to directly support you low-end one.
Another thing would be to add off-beat snare at 0:55 part - will or should add some nice rhythm (drive) to your track -> you also should do that (add something new to consistently increase this drive/energy) at 1:23 and 1:37 mark.
Not bad at all man !!!
Darek
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Originally posted by Viber
My first attempt at Trance, Unicorn Trance.
Is not really my cup of tea so I can't comment on style and attractiveness of this production but there is definitely something in it which make me listen to this WIP few good times - I think this track could grow to something really cool and interesting !!!
Darek
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Registered: Jun 2003
Location: City, Country format
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Is not really my cup of tea so I can't comment on style and attractiveness of this production but there is definitely something in it which make me listen to this WIP few good times - I think this track could grow to something really cool and interesting !!!
Darek
Thanx Darek, your opinion means a lot.
Wish we had Sean Tyas on the forum to help me out with this lol
Sep-27-2013 20:18
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Looks like nobody is willing to take on this WIP from you Juan lol so let be the first one and start with this: at this point I think you have your most promising and interesting concept developed so far (out of so many you posted over here) but there is still a lots of room for improvement (at least from my perspective ).
I would start first with this observation -> base line is too loose and wondering too much around your whole WIP. I would either increase loudness of the existing mid-range one (which comes around 0:32) or add additional mid-range one to directly support you low-end one.
Another thing would be to add off-beat snare at 0:55 part - will or should add some nice rhythm (drive) to your track -> you also should do that (add something new to consistently increase this drive/energy) at 1:23 and 1:37 mark.
Not bad at all man !!!
Darek
Thanks Darek, will take your advice into consideration man!
I will give some more feedback shortly but having probs playing SC.
In the meantime here's a lil techno dubby thing - nothing out the ordinary but the kinda groove I like myself.
The main arpy synth is a patch I made in my Roland Fantom, and recorded in live as I twiddled it's knobs.
Sep-27-2013 21:17
TranceElevation
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2010
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I will give some more feedback shortly but having probs playing SC.
In the meantime here's a lil techno dubby thing - nothing out the ordinary but the kinda groove I like myself.
The main arpy synth is a patch I made in my Roland Fantom, and recorded in live as I twiddled it's knobs.
I like the absence of a clap. And the mood is quite intriguing.
It has tons of space for improvement. The foundations are there, but it needs more color.
Sep-27-2013 21:34
Viber
In Search Of Unicorns
Registered: Jun 2003
Location: City, Country format
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
This is not exactly my taste, for me these tracks serve an important purpose: they are the first 1 or 2 tracks being played by Trance\House DJs in order to get the crowd in the mood.
It does need something to differentiate it from other tracks, i wish knew what