Originally posted by evo8
attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...
Nice, no crits just personal preference wanting louder bass
Was wondering if the break here sounds out of place? Was thinking maybe it needs more signifier of a drop? Watch out its loud as fuck.
May-03-2014 02:17
djnitride
Tiesto played my record
Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Texas
quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
Nice, no crits just personal preference wanting louder bass
Was wondering if the break here sounds out of place? Was thinking maybe it needs more signifier of a drop? Watch out its loud as fuck.
The position of the break doesn't sound out of place to me, but the loud noise does kick in pretty fast once the break starts, so its kinda like "break for a second or two and noise".
EDIT:
After listening to it a few more times I do think the build could be a bit louder / have a bit more noise which could make the break less jarring in terms of noise. So even though you build up with higher volume levels / noise, it still sounds like a break while having that noise that rolls off of the build.
Last edited by djnitride on May-03-2014 at 04:12
May-03-2014 02:35
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
Nice, no crits just personal preference wanting louder bass
Was wondering if the break here sounds out of place? Was thinking maybe it needs more signifier of a drop? Watch out its loud as fuck.
Yes thats what i'm talking about, good shit.
May-03-2014 05:58
evo8
Virtual Wannabe
Registered: Aug 2004
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
Nice, no crits just personal preference wanting louder bass
Was wondering if the break here sounds out of place? Was thinking maybe it needs more signifier of a drop? Watch out its loud as fuck.
thanks for the comment, i did actually think that bass needed to come up more so that confirms it for me!
the break is ok in your track, i just cant get past the distorted sound. Love the bassline, very mean and dark...
Nigga please, im like the cross of skrillex and deadmau5 divided by kasey taylor and multiplied by airwave.
May-03-2014 20:33
sleeping
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2005
Location: swedscherland
quote:
Originally posted by evo8
attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...
Really nice track. Im not that fond of the kick. Sounds abit to muddy, but other then that. Great work
May-03-2014 23:45
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
Nigga please, im like the cross of skrillex and deadmau5 divided by kasey taylor and multiplied by airwave.
You sure are man, I 'll follow you to even death friend, watch this.
May-04-2014 02:21
MSZ
godspeed
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: kill me
quote:
Originally posted by PaULiN0
You sure are man, I 'll follow you to even death friend, watch this.
Cool man, maybe you'll learn something and stop re-creating the same track over and over again.
May-04-2014 04:56
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
Cool man, maybe you'll learn something and stop re-creating the same track over and over again.
Which one's the same lol?
Last edited by PaULiN0 on May-04-2014 at 05:19
May-04-2014 05:07
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
quote:
Originally posted by djnitride
Not sure if anyone ever posts non EDM in here but what the heck . Im not great at being objective or critical with dance music, but Id love to give feedback on more ambient type stuff.
Plan on making a 4-6 minute version of the track with some field recordings I will be taking at the beach in a few weeks and maybe get my brother to take some during his trip to Spain/Ibiza soon, but this is the basic idea for the track. Going for a dark, warm, loungey beach vibe. Tear it to shreds only way I will improve.
The oceanic background is really nice. The background pad is also very lush and warm. The bass goes well with everything and its also well mixed but when it reaches the lead at the end of the intro it just takes everything into a different kind of journey. You should try to change it to go with and compliment the great atmosphere you have going on, cheers.
May-04-2014 07:06
SystematicX1
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Washington Coast
quote:
Originally posted by evo8
attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...
For sure nailed the vibe. Good stuff here man, old school house feel.
I do agree on the kick,not that it sounds muddy but it could use more lower frequency. Maybe even a sub under the kick,not alot...just a good presence. Do tell when it's finished!