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evo8
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quote:
Originally posted by Evolve140
the only real merit this track has is a tool for moving forward, keep working at it.

first off the chords are bad. holding that minor chord with no real cadence or release makes it unmusical at best.

also, the kick/off beat bass is really really dated sounding, and gets boring fast, drums are extremely basic. you need something to carry the track, whether it be rhythmic or some kind of melodic motif.

just keep at it, off to a good start if you're very new to production. the good news is there aren't any huge holes in the mix, but at the same time the mix itself is also playing it very safe, which is a good way to keep from having mix problems, but also doesn't allow much room for creativity.


agree, also too much sub going on - keep at it!


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its ok. not sure about the squelchy bass stab, think it might sound better with the filter closed more


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im more using it to learn transitions better its just thrown togeather i keep makin stuff get half way and then i dont like it and start again lol

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trying to get better at arrangement and transitions....




As Evolve said, the kick/bass combo doesnt stand out from each other that well. Kick sounds really weak against that kind of sub bass which just pounds and isnt well binded. At the end, where you just rose the octave on your bass sounds pretty weird. The pads could be also tighter and the high frequencies are little out of place.

Composition vise it does better.

Your other track sounds really clean. I kinda like it. Sounds lil bit empty and relays much on the lead.




Any problems with mix? I think I have pretty cool lead synth idea for this track.


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As Evolve said, the kick/bass combo doesnt stand out from each other that well. Kick sounds really weak against that kind of sub bass which just pounds and isnt well binded. At the end, where you just rose the octave on your bass sounds pretty weird. The pads could be also tighter and the high frequencies are little out of place.

Composition vise it does better.

Your other track sounds really clean. I kinda like it. Sounds lil bit empty and relays much on the lead.




Any problems with mix? I think I have pretty cool lead synth idea for this track.


lacking a bit of bass maybe?


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Sounds like the click on the kick, is a little too high in frequency or too loud, imo it shouldn't be louder than the hi hats, it sounds like it is clashing with them a little, to my ears, but I am listening on cans (K701's). I really like the direction of the track so far, I am very interested to hear this finished, keep up the good work, it has a nice vibe.


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Sounds like the click on the kick, is a little too high in frequency or too loud, imo it shouldn't be louder than the hi hats, it sounds like it is clashing with them a little, to my ears, but I am listening on cans (K701's). I really like the direction of the track so far, I am very interested to hear this finished, keep up the good work, it has a nice vibe.


Thanks Lucid, I tried using Bineaural Panning on the kick to create a better groove but I'm still new to the process. I think i should of just left it alone. However the pads I surrounded around the kick which to me was the aim i was going for, cheers. I will try and finish this one.

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i scraped the other one and worked on this

edit: updated below

Last edited by Oakenshield on Sep-09-2014 at 15:20

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i like that the perc seems dead maybe add in a deep tribel type thud to go on the loop

like

K--nock nock kick

it should thicken up the loop as it sounds great with that type of sound i think!

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i like that the perc seems dead maybe add in a deep tribel type thud to go on the loop

like

K--nock nock kick

it should thicken up the loop as it sounds great with that type of sound i think!


Yes Thoren, I am missing that. Will add some, thanks.

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Honestly it sounds like pretty much every WIP you post. Beat, pads, rolling bassline and/or mids. Mids in this case. Nothing really graps my attention. Try putting some melody or chords on top of this, start experimenting way out of your comfort zone, it really seems like you're always stuck on tiny things taking away from the bigger picture.


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