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gordan100
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Thanks for comments, Evo... The "Untitled" one needs rework, but i don't like it that much anymore.

Pushed aside still sounds good to me after few days, that is a good sign I'll try to lower the volume on organ as you suggested. Actually i don't think i should add too much stuff on that one.


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Originally posted by gordan100
Thanks for comments, Evo... The "Untitled" one needs rework, but i don't like it that much anymore.

Pushed aside still sounds good to me after few days, that is a good sign I'll try to lower the volume on organ as you suggested. Actually i don't think i should add too much stuff on that one.


either lower the volume on it or cut some lower mid - see which works best
and no i wouldnt add anything else, try to keep as much space as possible


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Richard Butler
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new techno one



Nice groove again Paul, you are the master of keeping the mix lean. 2 things I would maybe consider are 1) That big grinding fx noise that appears at the start and periodically is not very nice IMO. Maybe something like a mangled vocal stab or something a bit more in keeping with the track?

2) At about 1 minute I'm dyeing to have the hatz make a further progression (I realise they do this in the drop but I still want a development to happen at about 12 minute.

Your call of course, loving that subtle bass groove and the atmosphere



I've just finished this techno one mate;


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Great track Richard! Excellent vibe.


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Richard Butler
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Great track Richard! Excellent vibe.



Yea thanks Raph but I'm not satisfied with the drop.

I keep alternating between whether to go for a bigger drop or strip it back so it's more similar to the intro - nice and lean.

Maybe some feedback will help me decide this eternal conundrum of mine.


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Nice groove again Paul, you are the master of keeping the mix lean. 2 things I would maybe consider are 1) That big grinding fx noise that appears at the start and periodically is not very nice IMO. Maybe something like a mangled vocal stab or something a bit more in keeping with the track?

2) At about 1 minute I'm dyeing to have the hatz make a further progression (I realise they do this in the drop but I still want a development to happen at about 12 minute.

Your call of course, loving that subtle bass groove and the atmosphere



I've just finished this techno one mate;



thanks dude i will get back to this next weekend

just had a quick listen to yours, i like the foundation of the track at the start, after that it kinda changes style a few times so im not really sure about it then, not too gone on the vox, bit intrusive maybe?


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gordan100
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Like the drums, percussions, sound, very powerful. Yeah, that change of style at 2:10 sounds a bit weird to me too.

Love the build starting at 1:20-2:10, and then i was expecting that you will continue with this and add drums, but you have completely change style in that point, and everything droped down to me. But then again a great break at 3:00, and 3:30 down again .. But i think this could turn out really good if you base this at these break parts.


Evo, or Paul as i found out recently, i agree with Richard about the not so pretty sound he mentioned.


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And another one... This one i actually like

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Edit - this is wip 2


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My favorite project thus far, Sonic Academy Kick 2 is the shit.



Liking this. But yeah, kick takes too much space.


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SystematicX1
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And another one... This one i actually like

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Edit - this is wip 2



gordan? This is yours??
Very much dig this concept from you. I am going to listen a few times more as I think you deserve a serious critique with this. At least to my ears , I am really liking this and it has great potential
. Back after while

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These are just some observations :

Pads are really nice. However I believe they are to high in the mix and very prevalent. A nice glow imho would sound better.

Sub region could be bumped up. Is your sub in mono? It seems like its very spread out. The movement is nice and straight forward however on your note transitions I am wondering if it couldn't use a little portamento.

That melody with the gate and the low pass is very moody..really nice overtone.

I think you could use a little more work on your percussion. Albeit, very straight forward, very small bleeps,clicks and small fx would add some fill in space.

EQ...keep isolating each track,each tone. Build some depth in the lowend. Balance the mid range and add some sharpness to the higher frequencies.

Good Job! Want you to continue with this and want to hear it finished


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