|Originally posted by Richard Butler |
Ha, I'm such a fukin ingnoramus when it comes to pro trance, if it is stolen, I'd be the last to know. I tend mainly to lisen to techno when it comes to edm.
I still like your track, it has incredibly good percs and a huge sound. That bass line is ill, well done mate. I feel something else should be comming in around 145 or so like a big old 70's string riff - I can hear one in my head now. Build it to a cresendo then into that break.
The wailing siren is a little cliche - it's not as good as the rest of your track.
Dont be put off, I'm incredibly slow at making tracks, but honestly I thyink you need a totaly different break.
Seandroid, your track appeals to me much.
As far as the changes, I already submitted it to Raphie a few days ago (the version that is up on this thread).
Now, for your track, don't mess with it too much! I already liked the last version a lot, you do not necessarily have to 1up and already good track.