I understand what you were aiming for, but it turned out really boring, no energy, which is vital for things like this. That voice is annoying too. the colour of voice, the accent, and everything that was said. Keep at it, it all just takes experience.
A wise prophet hath once foretold:
Originally posted by stealthman
Vernon Wanderer will rediscover his roots back unto wandering vast endless plains miserably....
Registered: Apr 2010
this would pretty much ruin my high. Not sure what it is you are trying to showcase. At first i thought it was the queen.
Here is a dj intro a did for an event. The event was called contact. So the intro sort of has some context. The dj name is Derb , a big name back when it was done 2002 or 3 i can't remember. but ya, the problem is that you don't really put effort into anything you do. Notice how your intro has no context, it has a really silly voice, does not set any sort of mood and is just awful all round. Then listen to mine, and count how many layers of things going on. All those sounds are just raw foley sounds arranged to tell a story without a picture. Its kinda rave but this was for a mega rave so it worked. And those fx you hear, like those radio fx, those are doe with sampler oldschool. This tool me about 30 hours. I have a feeling yours took 40 minutes.