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[Sample] Dj Cola - Arabic Stuff (Psytrance Attempt)
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| Dj Cola |
Hiyo mates, this is a sample as you can see (apr. 2:38 minutes) and WELL, i tried to make something ethnic like and i think it became pretty good but some stuff needs drastic changes, like the come back at 2:00 something and some kicks.
bitrate is 192. and the synth i used is pro-53 :)
http://s6.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1PZFHK8X5UW250Y8JOENPLPEDF
direct link for lazys ;)
any "constructive" (:rolleyes: :toothless) criticism? |
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| Dj Cola |
Thought you guys would jump this since its psytrance but i guess not :/
atleast one reply except my own would be fun :) |
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| bidor |
dj cola, i listened to your track ang got the idea while listening to the song that i was listening to the intro of the song the whole time... a bit of melody in there would be nice & try to make the song abit longer, just when i thought the song was going to start the song stopped playing....
dont give up and try to re-do the song, the intro was ok;) :p |
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| Dj Cola |
| hehe thanks, i made a 16 bar string/synth melodi for the break and that is alot better i think ;). i redid some stuf in the tune and i will update later today i think |
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| bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Dj Cola
hehe thanks, i made a 16 bar string/synth melodi for the break and that is alot better i think ;). i redid some stuf in the tune and i will update later today i think |
that sounds better, im looking forward to it:toocool: |
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| Takkra |
hmm I quite like the track, it doesnt always have to have melody you know, a rythmic synth or a pecular sound, like the one that comes in around 1:29, would do the job as well :D!
bring it out a bit more. cool vocals!! you can try something with that too in a rythmic way. play with it, I hear potential :D:D! |
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| Dj Cola |
| well thank you takkra, i think its fair that when you invade my rutf i invade yours *laughs* :) |
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| Sparkunian |
It's nice for an intro but you must make it shorter.Put some fxs too to make it more interesting.I don't like also the sound at 1:07.Something wrong with the note.Quality and production is good except that sound that I told you before.I would like it also more psy after that intro :D :D
Sorry for this but I would like to listen a track with arabic and oriental melodies that I make and is psy trance.I'm not spaming just I'm interesting about your opinion cause we had the same idea at the same time!!The link for post is:Ofis-Psy trance
Cheers :) |
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| Dj Cola |
not to be mean but your bass line has very low bass or its just to high to be "felt", and the kick's are über weak :D my snares has a deeper feeling then those :). still you have super cool fx'es etc :).
your vocal samples are cool, like whisperings :)
http://s6.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1PZFHK8X5UW250Y8JOENPLPEDF
this still needs improvement, now the big question... should i or should i not make the tune shorter? |
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