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| razerscutpeople |
The soul inside is weakoning.
The hell outside grows stronger.
As it is my heart is still beating.
How can i stand the pain any longer.
Soon my soul will eject.
Soon the feelings no one will suspect.
As i will be without a soul within me.
I'll walk about with nothing.
Able to go in and nothing to go out.
The more i think of it the more i feel i'll be a lot better off just dieng. |
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| tribu |
my love is a leaf
torn as by a first gentle lover,
from the branch.
Tumbling, wumbling,
Summer Salting,
she shimmies through the bright afternoon,
whirling past a world of
wearily falling sheets
of rain and
maybe a feather or two float by.
Soon, she will plonk
into a puddle… ;
concentricting ripples
of her love.
ty poetry rocks. |
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| echosystm |
BUT THEY DONT RHYME
LAMERS ! |
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| citric_acid |
| quote: | Originally posted by echosystm
BUT THEY DONT RHYME
LAMERS ! |
dude, not all poems are sposed 2 rhyme, makes the cheeser if they do half the time |
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| echosystm |
| lol i cant believe you took me seriously :stongue: |
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| Radagast |
My love is like a piece of beef
Eaten with a side of potatoes like so many others
Living on a dude ranch
Taintstain, faintstain
Winter Wanking
I wish she would gimmie a piece of that poon
Walking down a lane with
Slowly drying circles
of brown cowpies and
maybe a dead skunk or a shrew lay nigh
Soon I will donk
into a rock
wanting her nipples
and saying it was love
I wear red socks. |
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| citric_acid |
| quote: | Originally posted by echosystm
lol i cant believe you took me seriously :stongue: |
~shrug~ hehe, well... what can i say, im special...ed |
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| ierxium |
Only true poets can write a good poem. People nowadays use a personification here and there mixed with the grievance of whatever it is they thought of while being upset because MTV didn't play a certain music video.
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| citric_acid |
| quote: | Originally posted by ierxium
Only true poets can write a good poem. People nowadays use a personification here and there mixed with the grievance of whatever it is they thought of while being upset because MTV didn't play a certain music video.
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oddly, that reminded me of a dream i had with a brick :wtf: |
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| ierxium |
| quote: | Originally posted by citric_acid
oddly, that reminded me of a dream i had with a brick :wtf: |
A brick. Wow, please elaborate...
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| fuct4less |
Roses are red,
Violets are blue
Some poems rhyme
And others don't. |
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| citric_acid |
| quote: | Originally posted by ierxium
A brick. Wow, please elaborate...
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i was hiding from something, and kept seeing a brick, there were helicopters and everything, weird dream, but the brick folowed me everywhere |
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