| DjArktik |
I'm listening to the radio edit of night lights right now...this song is very awesome...i love the melody and the bass...percussion is pretty good...your timing is a bit off on the bass sometimes, i dont know if you meant to do that, but it sounds good in some parts, not so good in others...you might want to try holding the melody a bit longer than what your doing...I love your drum fills on it too, the offbeat 32nd notes I've always loved (i use em :P) and when you combine that with bass and crash cymbal, you can make one hell of a buildup...all in all, i give the track a 7/10
Now listening to losted in time...again, seem to start a bit early...no need to rush, this isnt pop trance :P...strings are great at 0:45 or so...piano at 1:05 adds greatly to it...this little sequence witht he lead and piano sounds pretty cool...i like the melody again...not too complex, but holds your attention, reminds me of pvd's "another way"...the melody drop at 2:30 or so is awesome, adds more to the mood of the song...you could use a few pads, or turn up the ones ur using...ooh strings at 3:18 dont really fit in...maybe change the bass a little after that...your hihat and bass rhythm gets a little repetitive, maybe add a ride cymbal in there to liven things up...piano again at 4:10 is good...then song ends...i give that one a 5/10, not quite as good as night lights...
dunno if you wanted suggestions or not, but...there they are :) now you gotta tell me what you think of MY tracks :P
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