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Originally posted by Richard Butler So the feedback I got on this caused me to try and make something more atmospheric, I hope I've pulled it off. Any mix issues - bass too wooden for example? Maybe this bass no longer suits this changed track?

I'm not sure about the little kick rolls sprinkled here and there--you've got this sexy, funky, sweaty vibe going on (and loving the retro 80's huge snare hits) and then there's this sort of brrrrrp and the groove disappears for a moment. Only noticed because I was listening while cleaning and dancing, kept surprising my feet but not in a fun way.

The structure of the drop around 2:40 is top notch. Excellent use of the drop into silence thing, while making it sound fresh and new. A+

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Originally posted by Seandroid After getting my computer fixed, I think I'm finally done this.

when is this going to be available to listen? I keep having to dig through this thread just to hear it.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler So the feedback I got on this caused me to try and make something more atmospheric, I hope I've pulled it off. Any mix issues - bass too wooden for example? Maybe this bass no longer suits this changed track?

this is nice kinda chillout track, i would be inclined to smooth off the vocal a bit more but that would be personal choice

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Originally posted by Raphie some more development, bit deeper grooves, again live, but trying out the grooves for laying out the tracks. pretty happy with the groove now, loads of subtile details, just need to work on the flow.

to me it sounds like what it is...a jam so thats fine. im thinking that a lot of the sounds are a bit too wet - maybe keep some elements dry or really short room reverb to have more contrast?

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Originally posted by sylvannas Guess I posted it in the wrong section earlier. What do you guys think??

hi there

please follow the thread rules by firstly posting some feedback on the previous track (or tracks) posted before yours.

love everything about your track except that snare, its too brash for the track, bit of EQ might help, my 2c

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Originally posted by evo8 hi there please follow the thread rules by firstly posting some feedback on the previous track (or tracks) posted before yours. love everything about your track except that snare, its too brash for the track, bit of EQ might help, my 2c

Thank you. Will follow the rules from now on(returning after a long time) !!

I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done.

Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done. Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.

I liked the previos version also, but this is even better. Vocal sounds more natural, and removing the gun kicks is a good idea.

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Originally posted by sylvannas Thank you. Will follow the rules from now on(returning after a long time) !!

Your track is really nice man, something I would listen to in the car or at home. Technically it sounds good and even on my setup, cheers.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler This is actualy pretty cool and different and I enjoy the overall sound. The main leed is a bit too omnipresent, maybe replace it with something else here n there.

Thank you Richard! Your'e right about main lead, i'll try to do something with that...

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done. Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.

oh wow, yes. killing those kicks and smoothing out the vocals has really made this something deep and sleazy and funky. A++++++++

Also, I'm sure everyone has people listen to their tracks, they just don't do it so publicly.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done. Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.

nice one Richard, like this now

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done. Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.

It was quite a work Richard, really enjoyed this track - not much more to say, looks like this is almost ready to go shopping lol

Darek

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Originally posted by evo8 staying on a prog theme, happy with this one also!

that sounds well cool once it hits the 1 min mark! i still cant get my atmosphere to sound good as you yet but i think im slowely gettin there.

i have shortend the start of mine down a bit il upload it later

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I really like the melody and chord work once it gets going and it sounds good to. Maybe the open hat is a bit standard though.

Thank you i will look into changeing some of perc as i dont think it stands out enough

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Originally posted by Richard Butler So the feedback I got on this caused me to try and make something more atmospheric, I hope I've pulled it off. Any mix issues - bass too wooden for example? Maybe this bass no longer suits this changed track?

thats very funky! i have a few tunes on wax like that! the mix sounds ok but the lead and bass sound a bit flat to me but maybe thats what you was looking for! every thing else sounds cool though.

it seems i didnt notice the new version mate LOL the base sounds good in the newest post!




its still mostly structure no fx etc in it but is that better than the first?

small change in the hats that better now?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler

Wow! These vocals are great and their delays are spot on. Love the flanged stuff you have going on the background.

Very atmospheric and groovy track. Loving this!



Your mixes are really thight and they work. I would however go trough the open-hat sample. Sounds like its sticking out too much.

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Originally posted by sylvannas

Very dynamic and well built stuff. The mix is awesome excluding the snare as it being mentioned before.

I love it - needs moar lazer sounds in between

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done. Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.

You got a really nice funky groove here, vocals are good, and the mix sound fine too, I would prefer more centered cymbal though.

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Originally posted by evo8 something a little proggier

Mix is solid, I think its your best work so far.. there is something missing, I dont know what, some element, instrument to make it stand out.

It's too quiet bro. You need to turn it up more...

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Originally posted by TranceElevation It's too quiet bro. You need to turn it up more...

Sounds fine to me, maybe you need to turn your volume up.

Yup sounds good here.

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Originally posted by Mise

like the style of this, the bassline, kinda psy-ish?? i think you could do better with those stabs that hit the same time as the clap, doesnt work for me :-/

For me it's the 5th bar of the stabs that doesn't work; it feels very weird to carry the same note through after the progression of the first four bars.

Thanks for the insight guys. I was looking for a techy and psy vibe at the same time, I see what you point evo and deegee.

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