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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 I thought I'd share my first ever official release, from about a month ago, which happens to be a remix. Nothing amazing here, but I think I am slowly making progress. Additionally, I have some exciting collabs going on right now.

That's very nice and trippy... Pitch change was a bit unusual to my ears at first

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 I thought I'd share my first ever official release, from about a month ago, which happens to be a remix. Nothing amazing here, but I think I am slowly making progress. Additionally, I have some exciting collabs going on right now.

Well mixed track with good dynamics and sound balance also interesting melodic concept and arrangement

I wish that this could have some vocal (at least some parts) so could spread over the network much faster (if you know what I mean) lol

Nice release man !!!

Darek

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Originally posted by gordan100 I think i've made some progress here. I've removed "guitar sound" at the begining as Richard suggested, but used variation of same melody later in a much different fashion. How is that? Oh, and i'm a bit concerned about overall volume level which i think is pretty low, is it?. Too much bass?

Kinda growing on me, I get some of the same problems you have with bass, its probably in the 120hz area mud but sometimes ur better off choosing a new bass because when you start eqing it you lose some of the part which made you choose it in the first place.

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Originally posted by MSZ Kinda growing on me, I get some of the same problems you have with bass, its probably in the 120hz area mud but sometimes ur better off choosing a new bass because when you start eqing it you lose some of the part which made you choose it in the first place.

Thanks. Yes, i was messing with eq on bass, but i'm not happy with results. Maybe finding another...

Hey, i have listened some of your stuff on soundcloud. That is pretty amazing shit you do!

Thanks :} Here is a tiny wip from me, you see I have some bass issue from around same area here as well; Maybe I can fix it.

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 I thought I'd share my first ever official release, from about a month ago, which happens to be a remix. Nothing amazing here, but I think I am slowly making progress. Additionally, I have some exciting collabs going on right now.

very nice Caleb!

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Originally posted by MSZ Thanks :} Here is a tiny wip from me, you see I have some bass issue from around same area here as well; Maybe I can fix it.

ill be honest, im not gone on the progression, you can do better imo

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Originally posted by MSZ Thanks :} Here is a tiny wip from me, you see I have some bass issue from around same area here as well; Maybe I can fix it.

Quite like this Mac, this is your style man where everything is slowly progressing/developing but the rest of the track and how you will drive it will determinate the faith of it

Me like it.

Darek

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Originally posted by gordan100 I think i've made some progress here. I've removed "guitar sound" at the begining as Richard suggested, but used variation of same melody later in a much different fashion. How is that? Oh, and i'm a bit concerned about overall volume level which i think is pretty low, is it?. Too much bass?

Like your overall concept my friend but you will have to pay a bit more attention to your high/mid freq level as this (at least for now) is a bit on bright site and creates this unwanted effect of fatigue.

Just my $0.02

Darek

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Like your overall concept my friend but you will have to pay a bit more attention to your high/mid freq level as this (at least for now) is a bit on bright site and creates this unwanted effect of fatigue. Just my $0.02 Darek

Thanks Darek. Your'e right, i have overdo mid and highs on other instruments trying to compensate that muddy bass... It is overall to bright now, but i didn't realize this creates effect of fatique until you point that out Thanks again.

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Originally posted by MSZ Thanks :} Here is a tiny wip from me, you see I have some bass issue from around same area here as well; Maybe I can fix it.

I like it so far, as Darek said it all depends on where you'll take it, it is pretty short preview.

Helloall,

New user - discovered this forum this weekend and glad I finally got some time to join!

The track is below:

https://clyp.it/agaj0h2a


I'm very new to production and got started on this idea. I want it to be in the genre of uplifting trance. Can anyone please give me some feedback? Is the beginning good? As a listener, are you expecting something else?

I have not done any EQ yet.

Please let me know. Criticism and feedback are very important. The key is in G Major.

Thanks!

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 I thought I'd share my first ever official release, from about a month ago, which happens to be a remix. Nothing amazing here, but I think I am slowly making progress. Additionally, I have some exciting collabs going on right now.

Just noticed this.. Congrats dude very well done!!

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Originally posted by Seandroid I decided to make some super weird trap. I made that lead out of a metal bowl. This is obviously pretty early but I'll elaborate on it

Really not my thing, however you mixing skills are coming along just nicely, sounding good!!

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Sorry guys, it's Friday so you know what that means, feedback time. Getting close to finished, any thoughts on this as I am deffo sending this one out? EDIT> Ive improved it since posting this up earlier.

I quite like the idea of this track, its good. Can't add anything to what others have said.
You've got your workflow nailed like Rich, wish I could throw ideas and tracks out as rapid as you, and it's not like they all sound the same either, very diverse.

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Originally posted by evo8 just a quick tip Richard - i NEVER automate level faders for the precise reasons you give instead, if i want to automate volume, i put a Utility on the track and automate the gain on it instead. Surely Cubase has something similar?

Yes for sure.. Sometimes I even just use the output gain on what ever plug is last in your chain.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Thanks. Yes, i was messing with eq on bass, but i'm not happy with results. Maybe finding another...

I'm terrible for over doing things.. Just try cutting a little with eq, but yeah something sounds like it is resonating down in that area

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Originally posted by Kaisuken Helloall, New user - discovered this forum this weekend and glad I finally got some time to join! The track is below: https://clyp.it/agaj0h2a I'm very new to production and got started on this idea. I want it to be in the genre of uplifting trance. Can anyone please give me some feedback? Is the beginning good? As a listener, are you expecting something else? I have not done any EQ yet. Please let me know. Criticism and feedback are very important. The key is in G Major. Thanks!

Welcome to the boards man...
I would say that after listening to this track that you have the right ideas. I would say try spending a little time on your transitions. Add some atmospheric elements into those transitions (sweeps,etc)
Work on that kick and yea..EQ will really help. Try and bridge the gap of your higher frequency tones and lower frequencies.
As for your composition, it seems there are parts that are a little forced. Maybe the transition work will lend a better melding of the track

been putting some work into this one, i think it has a clear shot of doing some damage , once i polish it up . any advice/feedback would be great.

Good track

first thing - automate the verb on the leed so it goes dry and wet, don't leave it static#

still listening..........

Ok you will get this signed for sure, its a monster

again just move that verb around when the main lead drops so it's not so static and wet always, otherwise ready and full phat track

So here is my first track featuring Serum synth (as discussed in the thread about Massive). Really a joyous synth to work with.

Here it is on main mid bass duty and some of the plucky sounds.

Anyway, how is the mixing. I've done no mastering for once, as I want to see how mixing is first.

Vocals will be added.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Good track first thing - automate the verb on the leed so it goes dry and wet, don't leave it static# still listening.......... Ok you will get this signed for sure, its a monster again just move that verb around when the main lead drops so it's not so static and wet always, otherwise ready and full phat track

were you referring to me ? if so thanks!

yeah the mix down definitely needs a lot of work and i might get it professionally done hehe, and thanks for the tip ill try that out, going to check your tune now.

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Originally posted by LoveHate were you referring to me ? if so thanks! yeah the mix down definitely needs a lot of work and i might get it professionally done hehe, and thanks for the tip ill try that out, going to check your tune now.

Yes I was referring to yur track, it's a monsta mate

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Originally posted by Richard Butler So here is my first track featuring Serum synth (as discussed in the thread about Massive). Really a joyous synth to work with. Here it is on main mid bass duty and some of the plucky sounds. Anyway, how is the mixing. I've done no mastering for once, as I want to see how mixing is first. Vocals will be added.

Richard...dood, this has a ton of potential man.
The mix to me sounds low, pre production?
Sub sounds great. That Reese could use some accentuating.
Really dig the plucks.
not to sure about that high freq fill at 1:28.
This is a must complete imho

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Richard...dood, this has a ton of potential man. The mix to me sounds low, pre production? Sub sounds great. That Reese could use some accentuating. Really dig the plucks. not to sure about that high freq fill at 1:28. This is a must complete imho

I took out that nasty lead you mentioned and made the reese a little louder, and have now got the whole track done but yet to add proper vocals and do any mastering.

Note I accidentally left in some stray test vocals by accident

Cheers bud

Hmmm...the lead I don't believe was the issue and personally thought it was a nice added dimension ALONG with the reese.
The reese now has some clarity but think that nastiness was key.
As well, noticing a good amount of ducking on that sidechain,intentional?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I took out that nasty lead you mentioned and made the reese a little louder, and have now got the whole track done but yet to add proper vocals and do any mastering. Note I accidentally left in some stray test vocals by accident Cheers bud

Love this idea man, really catchy stuff but mixing/mastering will have hell of the time to properly get all of those levels and dynamics done - I'm not sure what and how everything supposed to seat but right now sounded a bit uneven, out of balance - at least to me Richard. When you get this under control this could be massive

Cheers,

Darek

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Welcome to the boards man... I would say that after listening to this track that you have the right ideas. I would say try spending a little time on your transitions. Add some atmospheric elements into those transitions (sweeps,etc) Work on that kick and yea..EQ will really help. Try and bridge the gap of your higher frequency tones and lower frequencies. As for your composition, it seems there are parts that are a little forced. Maybe the transition work will lend a better melding of the track

Thank you so much for the reply. I've been busy this whole week with work but wanted to let you know your feedback didn't go unnoticed. I'm going to start working on the song again this week so I will try to implement your feedback and post again!

Just would like to know what do you guys think?

I have no specific questions but want to hear your comments

Cheers,

Darek

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