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Good point. Also, the low end of the kick eats too much. If he was to put it slightly in the back that would open up the spot for some vocals.

Ok I did a lot of work on this now, is the structure weird?
Yet to do the transition from break to drop.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Ok I did a lot of work on this now, is the structure weird? Yet to do the transition from break to drop.

appreciate you are trying to progress and develop this track Rich but i actually prefer the original version :-/

Evo since you posted I've now finished it and even added a washed out verb to the break end as you suggested, repaired the vocals, added some layers to the drop (quiet pads but they just fill the space some), did the transitions.

Is this track good enough to warrant getting in a decent vocalist?

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Originally posted by evo8 this might be my submission for Colors 3

Wow. The Bomb

I have worked on drums and added some more progression. I'm terrible at drums so please tell me what do you think...

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Originally posted by evo8 this might be my submission for Colors 3

Badass

Extremely messy wip but had fun, ripped out the percs from an old project.

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Originally posted by gordan100 I have worked on drums and added some more progression. I'm terrible at drums so please tell me what do you think...

The bass sounds out of place when the melody kicks in. Overall you could spend a lill' bit more time with the EQing and studying scales

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Originally posted by evo8 this might be my submission for Colors 3

It reminds me of the tunes from the beginning of ASOT's around '04-05

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The bass sounds out of place when the melody kicks in. Overall you could spend a lill' bit more time with the EQing and studying scales

Yes, probably i should

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Originally posted by MSZ Extremely messy wip but had fun, ripped out the percs from an old project.

That sounds great! A big one.

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Originally posted by MSZ Extremely messy wip but had fun, ripped out the percs from an old project.

Nice driving quality and sounds authentic as ever

Thanks bros. Sorry it's really messy. Bass is too boomy. Cheers.

SONG STRUCTURE QUESTION. Structure is a weak point of mine.


In terms of a verse / chorus / break structure can you give your thoughts regarding the following track.

The vocals I took from a sample pack, I have more verse vocals to add.

How long should the intro / verse be?
About double what I have here do you think?

Then should the next lot of verse after the chorus be the same length as the intro verse?

This is just bare bones of a track, I want to get structure right first.

SECONDLY - are the vocals good enough to bother finishing this track? Would you layer them etc in the chorus or leave more or less as is?

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Originally posted by MSZ Extremely messy wip but had fun, ripped out the percs from an old project.

says Video is Private???

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Originally posted by Richard Butler SONG STRUCTURE QUESTION. Structure is a weak point of mine. In terms of a verse / chorus / break structure can you give your thoughts regarding the following track. The vocals I took from a sample pack, I have more verse vocals to add. How long should the intro / verse be? About double what I have here do you think? Then should the next lot of verse after the chorus be the same length as the intro verse? This is just bare bones of a track, I want to get structure right first. SECONDLY - are the vocals good enough to bother finishing this track? Would you layer them etc in the chorus or leave more or less as is?

Arrangement can take time to get right - you just have to listen back to the track (not in your sequencer as you will feel the need to tweak stuff)

then see how it feels - if you feel theres an extra 16 bars in there making things boring then get rid
listen to tracks of a similar nature for ideas also

another potential track for Colours 3 (or Colors 3 for the yanks )
thanks

Sounds great Evo, if only I had such mixing skills as you! Cery lively feeling to this one.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Sounds great Evo, if only I had such mixing skills as you! Cery lively feeling to this one.

thanks man - your mixing skills sound just fine to me!

heres the last one for this week, thanks for listening peeps

Again a genius track mate, are u signed to a massif label by now?

Need to makes some risers and rolls otherwise this one is nearly done

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Again a genius track mate, are u signed to a massif label by now?

thanks Richard, very kind!

as for labels - i started making my best music when i stopped worrying about trying to get signed by labels

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Need to makes some risers and rolls otherwise this one is nearly done

just on the laptop here but this is sounding quite nice, one problem for me is that kick isnt "knocky" enough to punch through - its a bit too "clicky" - i would try to layer in a kick with a nice punchy attack with this kick

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Need to makes some risers and rolls otherwise this one is nearly done

Sounds nice, maybe a little too repetitive.

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Originally posted by evo8

Great as usual!

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