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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Come to think of it, it's not really that similar. I don't know what the hell this is, to be honest.

Starts good, sounds good, but i don't know if it goes anywhere.. like most of my tracks

This is old stuff pimped again. Version 6.1. Hey, that's got to be pretty advanced version.

Can't upload on soundcloud for some reason.

https://hearthis.at/4thdimensionclu...club-breeze-61/

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Originally posted by MSZ Something Ive been slowly working on, its pretty simple but im waiting to get some speakers maybe this weekend before I work on it further, im sure it sounds nasally.

(think you pulled it but i got to listen to it anyway)

yeah this has serious potential, kick and clap are rough but you can fix that easily

the way the bassline resolves, i wonder could you play around with that at certain points in the track just to give it that big uplifting feel? would be amazing i think

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Originally posted by gordan100 Starts good, sounds good, but i don't know if it goes anywhere.. like most of my tracks

Yeah, this time it's actually not going anywhere by design. Just a lot of layers that pop out when you put on headphones.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Come to think of it, it's not really that similar. I don't know what the hell this is, to be honest.

this wont play again for me but it sounded like the kick didnt really fit right, sounded like an 808? sometimes they dont have that low mid punch but thats just how i hear it

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Originally posted by gordan100 This is old stuff pimped again. Version 6.1. Hey, that's got to be pretty advanced version. Can't upload on soundcloud for some reason. https://hearthis.at/4thdimensionclu...club-breeze-61/

i cancelled my soundcloud pro account, fuck them, i need to start using hearthis more

nice little track there mate, not sure but i thought the piano sounded a little dry

nice amount of tracks in here again

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Originally posted by evo8 this wont play again for me but it sounded like the kick didnt really fit right, sounded like an 808? sometimes they dont have that low mid punch but thats just how i hear it

Yeah, SC seems to have some playback issues right now.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Starts good, sounds good, but i don't know if it goes anywhere.. like most of my tracks

Yes I agree with this comment re Mr Mystery's track.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Very nice work Richard, you got something special going on in there mate - as far as any suggestion (structurally) I would cut 1:31~2:02 part out of this WIP and the rest is pretty good to go - really nice flow man. EDIT: Actually I would cut 1:15~2:05 exact lol. Darek

Right so a couple of you say cut out that first break but but but are you sure?

Wouldn't then people think it was to samey not having this first break too?

Do you think it's 'correct' to have only one break - I hope so in a way as I find double breaks SUCH A BORE to make!

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Originally posted by gordan100 This is old stuff pimped again. Version 6.1. Hey, that's got to be pretty advanced version. Can't upload on soundcloud for some reason. https://hearthis.at/4thdimensionclu...club-breeze-61/

I think this is better work from you as it has more of a dance feel to it and the kik is good. I personally think there should be times when it reverts just to a stripped back kick and bass otherwise it sounds too samey all through

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Right so a couple of you say cut out that first break but but but are you sure? Wouldn't then people think it was to samey not having this first break too? Do you think it's 'correct' to have only one break - I hope so in a way as I find double breaks SUCH A BORE to make!

Honestly, I'd keep the first break and cut the second one. The first break was the best part of the entire track.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Honestly, I'd keep the first break and cut the second one. The first break was the best part of the entire track.

Ha, just goes to show we all have such a divergence of taste eh.

I guess I ought to go with my own gut on this - as I've been advised to many times before.

I am also pondering Dareks advice to add a pluk in drop 2 - that's the sort of thing I would naturally do but I'm also mindful I get a lot of feedback saying I over-do tracks.

Mmmm decisions

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I guess I ought to go with my own gut on this - as I've been advised to many times before.

That is ultimately the point: if it sounds good to you, then it's right, no matter what anyone else says.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery That is ultimately the point: if it sounds good to you, then it's right, no matter what anyone else says.

uh-huh, you cant please everyone

also - put breaks in where you see fit, or.... dont have any breaks

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Right so a couple of you say cut out that first break but but but are you sure? Wouldn't then people think it was to samey not having this first break too? Do you think it's 'correct' to have only one break - I hope so in a way as I find double breaks SUCH A BORE to make!

Hi Richard,

at least for me this wasn't your first break (didn't feel that way) - rather then your transition from intro to main part of your track - you have a lot of fx going on in this production to compensate for luck of regular breaks (and I like that way, make this track more interesting) so ultimately decision is yours and I can only offer my personal preferences/view on this beauty.

Cheers,

Darek

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Come to think of it, it's not really that similar. I don't know what the hell this is, to be honest.

This is potentially very cool. I'm maybe wanting to hear a bit more groove in the bassline, or something. I'm not sure. There's some Orb DNA in here. I would definitely keep working on this one.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Thanks! Here's a bit longer version with different piano sound, same melody though, last chord slightly modified. Yeah, maybe i should try some more, but didn't come up with anything better yet.

I like this. Bass is unusual but it works. I'm feeling the gated pad would benefit from some lush reverb to sit it back in the mix a little.



After what seems like ages just dicking about with hardware. I remembered software.

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Originally posted by tehlord This is potentially very cool. I'm maybe wanting to hear a bit more groove in the bassline, or something. I'm not sure. There's some Orb DNA in here. I would definitely keep working on this one. I like this. Bass is unusual but it works. I'm feeling the gated pad would benefit from some lush reverb to sit it back in the mix a little. After what seems like ages just dicking about with hardware. I remembered software.

was gonna say its a bit generic sounding but the vocals are actually very nice

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Originally posted by tehlord This is potentially very cool. I'm maybe wanting to hear a bit more groove in the bassline, or something. I'm not sure. There's some Orb DNA in here. I would definitely keep working on this one.

Thanks. I've completed the original mix now, and plan on doing a couple of different takes on it. There's something strange about this track that makes me love it more than my other recent work, even though technically it's much, much simpler.

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Originally posted by evo8 was gonna say its a bit generic sounding but the vocals are actually very nice

Funnily enough I was aiming for generic. It's something to go behind some video work. Needs to not draw attention to itself. I'll most likely ditch most of the vocals for that version.

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Sounds wooshy and lushy , i like it, vocal is nice.


This sounds like generic

Just a club track

maybe some more upsweeps / grinder uppers in the breaks?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Just a club track maybe some more upsweeps / grinder uppers in the breaks?

I like it. Sounds good, it's groovy and vocal samples blends nicely.

I don't know what is this

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Originally posted by gordan100 I don't know what is this

pretty good mate - its get a bit busy when that arp comes in later, you could try to narrow the stereo field of it

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