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Originally posted by gordan100 One more. I'm a spam bot actually.

this one has the most potential i think, personally i dont think those stabs work

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Originally posted by evo8 this one has the most potential i think, personally i dont think those stabs work

it's also my favorite out of three.. I have misplaced some stabs notes and overdo them... I'll play with this one some more. Thanks for comment Evo!

Hi guys, long time no see

Feeling old school proggy.... Does the concept of the song work? Anything sticking out like a sore thumb? I need to clean up the reverb on the drums a bit I think.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Ok I totally changed it lol

Sounding good overall, concept and execution. Mixing wise, not sure if its because my MDR7506 are accentuating the highs on those hats too much, but they sound almost "prickly" to my ears, to the point it might bother me to listen to a longer version of the song.

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Originally posted by djnitride Hi guys, long time no see Feeling old school proggy.... Does the concept of the song work? Anything sticking out like a sore thumb? I need to clean up the reverb on the drums a bit I think.

I like it. Kick is sporadically clicky at the beginning and the end when playing solo. Very much like the pad. Arp is nice too.

Maybe some rhythm powerup at 2:10
At 2:55 i miss bassline, it sounds too empty for me there. Maybe some slightly faster variation of bassline at this point.

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Originally posted by gordan100 I like it. Kick is sporadically clicky at the beginning and the end when playing solo. Very much like the pad. Arp is nice too. Maybe some rhythm powerup at 2:10 At 2:55 i miss bassline, it sounds too empty for me there. Maybe some slightly faster variation of bassline at this point.

Great feedback, thanks

Uploaded an updated version that hopefully addresses some of this. Next up is mixing I think...

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Originally posted by djnitride Great feedback, thanks Uploaded an updated version that hopefully addresses some of this. Next up is mixing I think...

It's better now

Here some more crap of mine. I think i'm doing the same song all over again.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Here some more crap of mine. I think i'm doing the same song all over again.

Like it, only thing I might suggest would be opening it up a little at some point in the song for contrast, although I do like the progression you got going already.

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Originally posted by djnitride Like it, only thing I might suggest would be opening it up a little at some point in the song for contrast, although I do like the progression you got going already.

Thanks!

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Originally posted by gordan100 Here some more crap of mine. I think i'm doing the same song all over again.

i think maybe at this stage you might be overcomplicating things? i remember your older tracks were just simpler elements but grooved really well, just my 2c

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Originally posted by djnitride Great feedback, thanks Uploaded an updated version that hopefully addresses some of this. Next up is mixing I think...

yeah, i kinda like this, i like the sound of the midrange are you boosting there or something tricky?

it could do with a nice sub bassline undercurrent, just something incidental and punchy, that still maintains the groove ...imo

new one, will see where it goes



another one, really like the drop in this

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Originally posted by evo8 another one, really like the drop in this

This one caught my ear, like the song concept and good mixing on the bottom end of the track. Only suggestion would be maybe to do some percussion variation with the cymbal rides towards the end, and maybe bring out the percussion high-mids/highs more in the mix when you have all the other elements going after the breakdown.. Could easily hear this in a Drumcode set.

Also, how is hearthis.at? Better than Soundcloud?

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Originally posted by evo8 new one, will see where it goes another one, really like the drop in this

I like them both

This one may not be that bad

thanks mates, yeah fuck soundcloud i cancelled my sub

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Originally posted by gordan100 This one may not be that bad

its ok

Did alot more mixing on Global Underground. Tried to add some sustian to the bass low end without muddying up the mix. Did a sizeable EQ boost on the sub bass for the bass sound, and put an multiband envelope shaper on it as well to add a bit more sustain.

I plan on leveling out the alternative open high hat velocity that happens twice in the track also, but don't have time to get it right now.

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Originally posted by gordan100 This one may not be that bad

I like the delay on that chord and the bass sound is interesting. However, I think there may be a little too much tempo dissonance. Don't quantize it to death of course, but maybe tame it in a little?

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Originally posted by djnitride Did alot more mixing on Global Underground. Tried to add some sustian to the bass low end without muddying up the mix. Did a sizeable EQ boost on the sub bass for the bass sound, and put an multiband envelope shaper on it as well to add a bit more sustain. I plan on leveling out the alternative open high hat velocity that happens twice in the track also, but don't have time to get it right now.

Wow, sounds better and better! Very much interested in final result.

Any better?

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Originally posted by gordan100 Any better?

honestly not doing a whole lot for me, sorry

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Originally posted by djnitride Did alot more mixing on Global Underground. Tried to add some sustian to the bass low end without muddying up the mix. Did a sizeable EQ boost on the sub bass for the bass sound, and put an multiband envelope shaper on it as well to add a bit more sustain. I plan on leveling out the alternative open high hat velocity that happens twice in the track also, but don't have time to get it right now.

I think this track deserves a better bassline, i love the rest of it but its not grooving enough, even just some incidental midbass to get the groove going

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