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Originally posted by Evolve140

First part is awesome, like others have said already, break could be nicer... Like the bass, and overall new wave electro pop sound.

Didn't touch the structure yet, it's just a new mix.

How very far am i from some acceptable quality ?

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Originally posted by gordan100 Didn't touch the structure yet, it's just a new mix. How very far am i from some acceptable quality ?

A restful quality here. Drums need work Im afraid buddy

This came from inspiration from listening to Evos last

Just a WIP

Is it going anywhere?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler This came from inspiration from listening to Evos last Just a WIP Is it going anywhere?

I like it Rich, it def goes somewhere. That hat is to strong or sharp imo.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler This came from inspiration from listening to Evos last Just a WIP Is it going anywhere?

sorry mate the dissonant chords are kinda spoiling it for me, not sure on the vocal either its very loud

This is probably best i can do... also, i don't want to listen this track for some time . Need for an ear flushing.

Tried to separate sounds, but don't know with how much success. Bass string is pretty wide, it's sidechained on kick but still... if i cut his envelope then there is not enough power. I've raise mid on hook part, but it's still loose some volume when everything hit at once.

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Originally posted by gordan100 This is probably best i can do... also, i don't want to listen this track for some time . Need for an ear flushing. Tried to separate sounds, but don't know with how much success. Bass string is pretty wide, it's sidechained on kick but still... if i cut his envelope then there is not enough power. I've raise mid on hook part, but it's still loose some volume when everything hit at once.

id say let this one go mate you're capable of better, im greedy i just wanna hear something new

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Originally posted by evo8 id say let this one go mate you're capable of better, im greedy i just wanna hear something new

Thanks, it's very nice from you to say that. I would probably already give up without you all on this thread ... btw. Where is msz? Get back here you old bugger...

Worked on these two older today...

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Originally posted by gordan100

Like this, quality has for sure improved. That kick though, about knocked me out of my chair..lol but overall production has much improved Gordan
Speaking of which, I took your advice and changed the piano on this.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler This came from inspiration from listening to Evos last Just a WIP Is it going anywhere?

Im really liking the arpeggio at the end of the clip. If im completely honest the rest of it is not working for me, especially the vocal. Drums and bass sounding tight though. I would scrap the rest of the music in this track, and use that end section and build a track around that and the drums/bass. That end bit is really awesome IMO. All IMO as always....

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Like this, quality has for sure improved. That kick though, about knocked me out of my chair..lol but overall production has much improved Gordan Speaking of which, I took your advice and changed the piano on this.

really nice ideas in here, especially from around the 2 minute mark onwards. I feel the mix isn't right, there is a lack of low end punch and clarity with the sub being nearly inaudible in places and to me the kick and snare dont sound right as they are. If it were me i might change them completely. Also chuck a pro tune of a similar style in your arrange page and reference with regards to mixing.

to my ears sort out the drums, sub and polish the mix and your on to a winner


All IMO as ever.....

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Originally posted by chris marsh really nice ideas in here, especially from around the 2 minute mark onwards. I feel the mix isn't right, there is a lack of low end punch and clarity with the sub being nearly inaudible in places and to me the kick and snare dont sound right as they are. If it were me i might change them completely. Also chuck a pro tune of a similar style in your arrange page and reference with regards to mixing. to my ears sort out the drums, sub and polish the mix and your on to a winner All IMO as ever.....

Thanks Chris for the valuable insight!
With that said I decided to experiment with a new kick and snare tone and checked on the bass. Damn if my cans aren't giving away to the dead.
I haven't done the ultimate test in the truck yet but think this did a little more improvement.
Appreciate the advice.

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Thanks Chris for the valuable insight! With that said I decided to experiment with a new kick and snare tone and checked on the bass. Damn if my cans aren't giving away to the dead. I haven't done the ultimate test in the truck yet but think this did a little more improvement. Appreciate the advice.

Sounds better than prev version. Me like it.

I have another wip, but it's not a track.

Sorry it's offtopic, if admin think it's inappropriate please delete...

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfil...s/?id=798519862

It's a casual, simple game, 3d arkanoid clone that i'll release in a month or two on Steam. I would like to have a nice soundtrack on this, so if you have some nice unreleased tracks that you think it would fit on this and would like some promotion - please send it on pm. I think that soundtrack can be sold separately on games, so anything is possible.

I will probably need to change some ingame sounds, and make them mono, because now they clash a lot with songs being played at the same time. I have used a deep kick as a sound when ball hits something

Prev mix was really bad when i listened on cans This one is a bit better. Is this going anywhere?

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Originally posted by gordan100 Prev mix was really bad when i listened on cans This one is a bit better. Is this going anywhere?

Dig the groove you are going for. Some elements seem to not be gelling however.
You have a lot going on there, couldn't decipher at the 2:00 mark if it is a delay or what but the arp effects are slightly out of time and jumping which confused my ears...lol.
Curious and dumb question. Is your kick in mono?
Shaker cymbals were very bright on my ears.
As well your transitions with your sweeps, imo could be more atmospheric and not so forward in your mix. Automation would be very useful with that.
Good work, want this to develop more!

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Originally posted by gordan100 Prev mix was really bad when i listened on cans This one is a bit better. Is this going anywhere?

main lead is too loud and drowning out the rest of the track, also i cant really hear any bassline ?

Thanks for comments guys. No, Systematic, kick wasn't mono or at least i didn't switch to mono by purpose . Yeah it's pretty messy mix, thanks for you ears guys. I've lower main lead volume, but maybe needed more.

Some "bassline" if now after 2:00 but don't know if that took me too melodic :/

Yeah, the lead is still too loud. And there's this thing that starts around 1:30 that sound really weird and off, but I don't know if that's a synth or just a reverb/delay of it.

I would also seek a deeper, rounder kick for this. The current one sounds a bit too nineties eurodance-y for my tastes.

I think I posted a clip of this earlier, but I'm not going to work on it any more, so here - a free track:

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Originally posted by gordan100 Thanks for comments guys. No, Systematic, kick wasn't mono or at least i didn't switch to mono by purpose . Yeah it's pretty messy mix, thanks for you ears guys. I've lower main lead volume, but maybe needed more. Some "bassline" if now after 2:00 but don't know if that took me too melodic :/

yeah i dunno its not really working mate

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery I think I posted a clip of this earlier, but I'm not going to work on it any more, so here - a free track:

not bad i woulda changed some things but its done, i got a little Stylus Trouble vibe off it in places

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