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I guess this is chillout.

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Originally posted by Deillon I guess this is chillout.

I like that.

As for feedback I'd probably like to hear a little more in the way of stereo spread in the synths. It all seems a little dense right now. Perhaps a little subtle audio ambience through a nice big reverb just tickling away in the background to add some depth to the mix as well.

Cool vibe though.


Thanks for the feeds on the Psy as well. It's obviously far from a finished mix so I can take those points on board. I hadn't noticed the filter killing the pitch so I'll take another look at that.

@dj_kyle, nice track, I like the pads and leads, they go well together but I feel like there a little too much compression going on in the mix for my taste but nice track, keep it up

what genre do you believe this to be

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Originally posted by Deillon I guess this is chillout.

sounds good try doing some pan automations to better bring out the arpeg, if it was an arpeg lol

Yeah, I guess it can be classified as an arpeg I guess.
Thanks for the feedback tehlord & lryso, I will try to pan out instruments and perc a bit more.

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Originally posted by tehlord Messing about with KarmaFX now it's 64 bit. Totally stable btw. All drums and the intro texture are samples. Rest is KarmaFX.

love the synths and fx, nice edge to them, the bass is nice as well
not liking the snare or the kick really.......

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Originally posted by meriter here's a WIP... I think the power cord for my laptop finally crapped out so I might be MIA for a while

theres something interesting about this track it got my attention, keep doing what your doing, as your skills improve you will be able to implement your ideas better

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Originally posted by Deillon I guess this is chillout.

really nice, cool track, i really like the high pitched melody sound, its a pity it gets slightly drowned out by the other synths that come in - maybe try and prioritise it in the mix a bit more?

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Originally posted by optik I'd love some last minute advice about this; need to have it finished in a couple of days: really appreciate it and I promise I'll be a good critter/reviewer

its ok, bit generic for me

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Originally posted by Lryso what genre do you believe this to be

i dunno what to say about this really lol

@optik, the track tshark - first class is a good track from what I heard, I would suggest some sound fx in the beginning and maybe the background pad mixed in with the bass, overall good job, keep up the good work.

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Originally posted by evo8 really nice, cool track, i really like the high pitched melody sound, its a pity it gets slightly drowned out by the other synths that come in - maybe try and prioritise it in the mix a bit more?

Which one? The arp-like starting at 0:48?

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Originally posted by evo8 i dunno what to say about this really lol

Me neither lol I'm very confused as to what it is classified as. Did you enjoy it or was it too generic or not your style?

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Originally posted by wayfinder To me, the sound is relatively raw overall, what with the rumbling kick sound, the somewhat basic hihat pattern, the bass/pad synth choices, and the extremely sparse fx work. That's not a bad thing per se, but I think the track could benefit from a little smoothness somewhere, if only to create a contrast against which the rawer elements sound even more paleo Maybe one of the existing elements could be adapted (I think the kick or the pad would be good choices), or something could be added (like an arp, or some more flowing percussion). Does that make sense?

I've been away for a while so sorry for the late reply. I don't really know what to make of your criticism. It sounds like you don't like it that much Kick and drums is what I have most problems with, so I can agree they may not be top notch.

The raw sound was what I was going for with this one. I kinda like it, but maybe your right about creating some contrast. It gets even rawer later on

I think I will give this tune a few more hours and then move on. Can't work on it for ever. Thanks for your comments.

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Originally posted by wayfinder Here's something I'm working on that I'd like to get some feedback on. This preview isn't an arrangement yet, I just threw together what parts I had without any transitions or song structure. What I'm looking for is feedback on whether it's unique enough - after the initial session I suddenly noticed that it felt a bit like I had unconsciously replicated a specific track (although I couldn't say which one). And if you have any other, more general feedback (on sound choices, composition, whatever ), that's very welcome too! wayfinder - thrillipreview by wayfinder Thanks for listening! edit: oh yeah the reason why it's called thrillipreview is that i made the drums almost completely with the preview pack from the new thrillseekers samples from freshly squeezed

Maybe a little late to comment on this one now, are you done with it?

Sounds like a nice track to chill to. I like the bass and the melody is good to. Don't know about uniqueness, but in my opinion it doesnt have to be more unique then this to be enjoyed.

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Originally posted by Deillon I guess this is chillout.

I like the beat. Not to happy about that high blip though, gets distracting for me. Would prefer something totally different to be honest.

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Originally posted by Lryso what genre do you believe this to be

Don't know what this is, cluttered psycho house maybe. Cool use of the vocal samples. There are elements I like in there, but it gets a little bit to much here and there But yeah, some cool stuff.

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Originally posted by Lryso Me neither lol I'm very confused as to what it is classified as. Did you enjoy it or was it too generic or not your style?

yeah sorry that may have across as being harsh - i just wouldnt be into that style at all

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Originally posted by Deillon Which one? The arp-like starting at 0:48?

yeah has a nice old school sound to it

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Originally posted by evo8 yeah sorry that may have across as being harsh - i just wouldnt be into that style at all

It's all good. Tbh I didn expect many to like it. I set out to make something different and that usually comes with people not liking it. Everyone has a right to opinion especially with a track as experimental as this haha

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Originally posted by Lryso what genre do you believe this to be

I actually like this. It sounds cool to me. the mix down doesn't sound good on my speakers tho. The bottom end is a little muddy.

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Originally posted by Vancouver I actually like this. It sounds cool to me. the mix down doesn't sound good on my speakers tho. The bottom end is a little muddy.

Well thank ya! Ya I don't own any monitors yet and my landlord is pain in the ass about music being played. I need to take it into a studio and correct some frequencies and mix. Thanks for the heads up

Changed the drum pattern as well as the bass and added a snare with delay.

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Originally posted by Juan Paulino Changed the drum pattern as well as the bass and added a snare with delay.

Ill be completely honest. I don't like it. There is no groove in the drums and they are so repetitive its boring to me. The only thing that sounds good to me is your synth work so its not all bad! lol sorry

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