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Well, the track as a whole is weird. That was the idea.

Out of tune.

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Originally posted by evo8 you hardly concentrated on the mix down?? i dont understand, just trying to help you out

Sorry if i came off as a prick, its a logic 9 project and will re do it in logic 10. I'll post a clip soon and then let know me know how it sounds on your system.

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Originally posted by Deillon Out of tune.

Shit happens.

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Here is the continuation of a wip I posted some months ago. Maybe I'll finish it some day, we'll see.

It's out of tune and the sound design needs a lot of work man. It sounds extremely preset-ish.

Which sound exactly sounds preset-ish cause I made all the sounds.

Of course at the end everything is going to finish as a preset when I/you store it.

Alright this one's for EVO8



How does it sound now?

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Excellent mix, nothing else to say.

Thanks, was kinda hoping for someone to pick it apart. Anyone else?

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Originally posted by TranceElevation

This just ain't working at all, and considering your other wip was built up in under an hour, I would just bin this.

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Originally posted by UrbanNinja How does it sound now?

Starts off really well but the bass isn't quite sitting right for me. Not sure if you need to compress it a little more or even just turn it down a db?

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Originally posted by Andy28 Thanks, was kinda hoping for someone to pick it apart. Anyone else? This just ain't working at all, and considering your other wip was built up in under an hour, I would just bin this. Starts off really well but the bass isn't quite sitting right for me. Not sure if you need to compress it a little more or even just turn it down a db?

Thanks man, I have factory compression settings for the side chained bass, I will look for better settings when i find some and I have no treatment. I'm swamped with bills matey!

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Which sound exactly sounds preset-ish cause I made all the sounds. Of course at the end everything is going to finish as a preset when I/you store it.

I meant they seem cheap/thin. They lack richness or any character.

Alright Andy, hows the bass now? I improved the kick, added chorus, detune, and strict compression settings, pretty much alchemic sorcery!

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Originally posted by Seandroid I meant they seem cheap/thin. They lack richness or any character.

Ah ok, got it.

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Originally posted by Andy28 This just ain't working at all, and considering your other wip was built up in under an hour, I would just bin this.

Well, the fact that I didn't even care for it being out of tune pretty much tells how much I cared about that track.
I use it to test some new plugins mainly.

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Originally posted by UrbanNinja Alright Andy, hows the bass now? I improved the kick, added chorus, detune, and strict compression settings, pretty much alchemic sorcery!

It does sound better, and the acid sound fits in better with it as well. Sounding good

Wish you would leave the old one up though makes it easier to compare the changes

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Originally posted by Andy28 It does sound better, and the acid sound fits in better with it as well. Sounding good Wish you would leave the old one up though makes it easier to compare the changes

Right On, I lowered the acid lead to a couple decibels, surprised you caught that. Yeah i should have somehow left the original WIP to compare matey! hRhRhR

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Originally posted by Andy28 I don't think he meant that Nice sounding track, very old school reminds me a lot Veracocha. Mix sounds good. Any thoughts on the mix of this?

Seriously uplifting mate, great sound. Like the little melodic ideas. Just one of those tracks that I can instantly imagine on a tv show of teens clubbing in the Med.

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Originally posted by UrbanNinja Alright Andy, hows the bass now? I improved the kick, added chorus, detune, and strict compression settings, pretty much alchemic sorcery!

track is ok but at this stage i would just finish it and move on to something else
ime the longer you spend working on a mixdown the less satisfying the end result is

i changed the kick on this one as i didnt really like the original - how u like me now???

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Seriously uplifting mate, great sound. Like the little melodic ideas. Just one of those tracks that I can instantly imagine on a tv show of teens clubbing in the Med.

Thanks Richard

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Originally posted by evo8 i changed the kick on this one as i didnt really like the original - how u like me now???

Not really my thing so can't say a lot. Great mix though can never fault you for that, and the 2nd break is cool as it builds up with the vocal delay verb fx.


Here's an update, added a little more. Might actually finish this if I can get the breakdown done and sounding ok.

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Originally posted by Andy28 Thanks Richard Not really my thing so can't say a lot. Great mix though can never fault you for that, and the 2nd break is cool as it builds up with the vocal delay verb fx. Here's an update, added a little more. Might actually finish this if I can get the breakdown done and sounding ok.

hmmm theres something missing from this, the whole track sounds a bit highpassed, the bass isnt really standing out - is it possible to download this WIP??

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Originally posted by UrbanNinja Alright Andy, hows the bass now? I improved the kick, added chorus, detune, and strict compression settings, pretty much alchemic sorcery!

The track is great and the mixdown REALLY works but as evo8 said it, i would try to move out of the mixing area and get something really done. If you are really trying just to polish on your technical execution then its totally different. But even though you would just trying the technical mambo jambo, when you'r stuck whit just one track it doesn't get you much far. Change the track and change the dynamics!

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Originally posted by Andy28 Thanks Richard Not really my thing so can't say a lot. Great mix though can never fault you for that, and the 2nd break is cool as it builds up with the vocal delay verb fx. Here's an update, added a little more. Might actually finish this if I can get the breakdown done and sounding ok.

Great uplifting piece! The mid/sub base could have more going on (low vise) if you just push the sidechain. But same happens whit the kick, could be just soundcloud messing it up though so cant really tell.

Thanks guys.. Evo I've sent you a pm

Cheers

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Originally posted by evo8 i changed the kick on this one as i didnt really like the original - how u like me now???

Cool tune

i like the fx and background sounds a lot

for me the kick is working great, but the bass isn't working. I would say replace it. I think the bass needs to be more interesting/layered and perhaps could move about a bit too

like the sizzling rides, nice

imo of course

Hi guys

This is a collab, and vocals still pretty raw etc. The instrumental still needs work too

Im really trying to look at the arrangement and the song more than anything ATM.

Bit unsure about the arrangement ATM. Once weve sorted it we will rerecord vocals and produce it/ mix it down proper

Thanks

C

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Originally posted by chris marsh Hi guys This is a collab, and vocals still pretty raw etc. The instrumental still needs work too Im really trying to look at the arrangement and the song more than anything ATM. Bit unsure about the arrangement ATM. Once weve sorted it we will rerecord vocals and produce it/ mix it down proper Thanks C

I like the vocals , not sure they need re - recording mate? Sometimes I don't always want everything ultra polished.


Nice easy going vibe. Personally this sort of track just rolls along, I don't think it needs any kind of spectacular arrangement, just variation and perhaps a couple of breaks.

Love that tom in the beat, you must not remove that as it makes the track grove very well.

This kind of track me and my Brother will play in the car when riding up to London, just nodding along but do give it a bit of silky killer bass to really make it shine. Bring in the bass after quite a while as this track you can get away with that and the tension and release would be real nice.

Don't really know if this helps.

Always loved those 3 am Rhodes sounds mate.

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