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Been working on songwriting lately (song structure, chord progression, key changes, ect) and I am really interested in melodic acoustic stuff; piano, classical guitar, ukulele and others. I wrote this song for piano (I am not playing it btw, I wrote it note by note and changed a lot of the note velocities to give it a natural feel). There isn't really that much to give feedback on (just a piano) but I thought I would post it since it is something a little different.

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Originally posted by Andy28 Cheers

Sounds good! bass & kick work well & sound nice and tight. you could try more variation on transitions (0.27) to keep it interesting

Edit; Just used the same vox sample in a new track .. must be a veela sample am hearing these everywhere!

New track here, still in progress so levels are a bit off any feedback on this would be great. cheers

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Originally posted by Andy28 Can't really add much to what has already been said. Nice track though great atmos you have going on. Been working loads lately so haven't had time to play about much. Had most of this weekend free so decided to give studio one a try out again, a nice alternative to ableton. Here's my first wip from it Cheers

nice start!

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Been working on songwriting lately (song structure, chord progression, key changes, ect) and I am really interested in melodic acoustic stuff; piano, classical guitar, ukulele and others. I wrote this song for piano (I am not playing it btw, I wrote it note by note and changed a lot of the note velocities to give it a natural feel). There isn't really that much to give feedback on (just a piano) but I thought I would post it since it is something a little different.

very nice, like it!

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Originally posted by jf2010 New track here, still in progress so levels are a bit off any feedback on this would be great. cheers

yeah this is pretty good for this style of music, nice

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Originally posted by evo8 yeah this is pretty good for this style of music, nice

Cheers man , glad u like

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591

This would make a good track you should work on it. If not, send me the midi

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Originally posted by jf2010

Great sounding track. Could maybe benefit from a proper lead sound and melody on top of those chords, just something simple. The piano thing is what I always do myself but its not working for me going along as it is hitting them notes the same as the rest. Try mixing it up a bit.

Well done!!

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Been working on songwriting lately (song structure, chord progression, key changes, ect) and I am really interested in melodic acoustic stuff; piano, classical guitar, ukulele and others. I wrote this song for piano (I am not playing it btw, I wrote it note by note and changed a lot of the note velocities to give it a natural feel). There isn't really that much to give feedback on (just a piano) but I thought I would post it since it is something a little different.

Good melo and playing, what piano are you using, sounds great?

DARK AIR - you execute your tracks very well, good work on this one.

Here is my last WIP which was called English Boys but it's taken a light hearted turn.

Does it need an 'epic' synth passage at the end (where the track currently ends)?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Here is my last WIP which was called English Boys but it's taken a light hearted turn. Does it need an 'epic' synth passage at the end (where the track currently ends)?

i dunno man, not feeling this one :-/

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Here is my last WIP which was called English Boys but it's taken a light hearted turn. Does it need an 'epic' synth passage at the end (where the track currently ends)?

It's need a good frequency filling pad, because the synth lines aren't carrying it enough I think.


Here is something I found on my old computer, started working on it again.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Here is my last WIP which was called English Boys but it's taken a light hearted turn. Does it need an 'epic' synth passage at the end (where the track currently ends)?

I think this is awesome. This has some of the best sound design I have heard on one of your tracks and is very current sounding, while still being original and unique.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Good melo and playing, what piano are you using, sounds great?

I am not actually playing it, I wrote it in FL Studio and made a lot of changes to the velocities of the notes to give it a natural playing feel. The piano is a freeware VST called Piano One, with some reverb and compression.

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Originally posted by Andy28 This would make a good track you should work on it. If not, send me the midi

I might make it into an EDM track in the future, but I have other projects at the moment. I sent you a message about the midi.

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Originally posted by Deillon It's need a good frequency filling pad, because the synth lines aren't carrying it enough I think. Here is something I found on my old computer, started working on it again.

From the off this got me nodding. That kick and perc are fantastic but I feel the track looses this special interplay as soon as the bass comes in.

Personally speaking I'd go back to just those first few seconds and build a simple rhythmic track around that part.


Thanks for commenting on mine - the original had shed loads of synths and melodies but I removed them because I wanted a very clean impact sound at full volume, so I ended up with whats here now.

You have prompted me to make those leads a bit more interesting and special though cos I know they are kinda basic sounding but I wont make the changes unless it comes out clean and loud at full volume.


Thanks to evo and trancelover for you feedback.
I'm so critical that I already think it's not good enough but I will finish this one.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Here is my last WIP which was called English Boys but it's taken a light hearted turn. Does it need an 'epic' synth passage at the end (where the track currently ends)?

I really like this - especially the sub bass, but it seems very, very dry. There's almost too much room!

This is a remix I started working on that I'm pretty happy with. It's almost done. It's an attempt at kind of fusing the aggressive chopped & screwed kind of electro that I like with the big room sound. I'm probably gonna work on the growl sound that starts the phrase in the drop to make it more dynamic.

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Originally posted by Seandroid I really like this - especially the sub bass, but it seems very, very dry. There's almost too much room! This is a remix I started working on that I'm pretty happy with. It's almost done. It's an attempt at kind of fusing the aggressive chopped & screwed kind of electro that I like with the big room sound. I'm probably gonna work on the growl sound that starts the phrase in the drop to make it more dynamic.

Sounds great on my phone speaker and thsts a really good sign imo. Will have a proper listen later

TThere's the grittyness I've always been looking for in the Seandroid tracks I heard earlier. Well done!

Droidika, grt track, always evolving, plenty good sonicx, approved.

Maybe drums could be slightly louder, not sure tho.

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Originally posted by Deillon It's need a good frequency filling pad, because the synth lines aren't carrying it enough I think. Here is something I found on my old computer, started working on it again.

this is really good.....until the drop and the whole track changes mood into something else
it has a nice dark feel but i wouldnt go with the onbeat snares after the break, id be tempted to return to how the track was before the drop, maybe add some heavier noisy hats/rides or some sort of extra perc, taking care not to go too muddy

good job, my 2c...

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Originally posted by Seandroid I really like this - especially the sub bass, but it seems very, very dry. There's almost too much room! This is a remix I started working on that I'm pretty happy with. It's almost done. It's an attempt at kind of fusing the aggressive chopped & screwed kind of electro that I like with the big room sound. I'm probably gonna work on the growl sound that starts the phrase in the drop to make it more dynamic.

wouldnt be into this style at all but anyway, sounds a bit narrow to me?? not much width to my ears
also the snare isnt really having much impact for me, actually the whole drums need to come up i think - bit light on bass too

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Originally posted by Seandroid I really like this - especially the sub bass, but it seems very, very dry. There's almost too much room! This is a remix I started working on that I'm pretty happy with. It's almost done. It's an attempt at kind of fusing the aggressive chopped & screwed kind of electro that I like with the big room sound. I'm probably gonna work on the growl sound that starts the phrase in the drop to make it more dynamic.

Sounds awesome!

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