[Trance] State of Matter - Time Will Heal [128 kbps Clip]

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Posted by State of Matter on Oct-06-2004 16:59:

[Trance] State of Matter - Time Will Heal [128 kbps Clip]

This is a track I wrote that's got a lot of tragic history behind it that I won't get into because it's not my place to do so. All I can say is it is an interpretation of an accoustic guitar melody that a friend of mine wrote as sort of a requiem.

Honest feedback welcome, been working extremely hard on this for the past several weeks inbetween classes.

http://home.comcast.net/~dbogle/tim...al_128_clip.mp3

Posted by Luke Terry on Oct-06-2004 18:50:

great stuff mate, gettin played out tonite this is!

Posted by Mane on Oct-06-2004 19:53:

really like you track it has great atmosphere it remainds me something but i dont know what really like melody keep it up

Posted by Icone on Oct-06-2004 19:54:

Sweet stuff as always, pads/strings and guitar are ace!

The kick is atad too solid compared to the bass though I think. I feel the percs are a bit drowned as well after the climax...

Cheers,
Wim

Posted by jcosgrove on Oct-06-2004 20:50:

this is really nice man, the breakdown is gorgeous.

any chance of a version to play???

Posted by State of Matter on Oct-06-2004 21:08:

Can do, you want it on the ftp or msn?

BTW thanks for all the comments so far guys, apperciate it!

Posted by Jay M on Oct-07-2004 12:54:

Pretty nice pads, tho altogether it's a bit too blurry for my ears, maybe because of the reverb on it?
The kick sounds a bit ploppy, maybe beacause there's too less bass to back it up?

Rest is pertty mint!! Good work.

-Jay

Posted by jcosgrove on Oct-07-2004 13:01:

quote:
Originally posted by State of Matter
Can do, you want it on the ftp or msn?

BTW thanks for all the comments so far guys, apperciate it!

ive pm'ed you my msn

Posted by TOR on Oct-07-2004 16:10:

great melody, but that guitar(?) does not fit the track at all.. it does not blend well with the other sounds.

strings are great. just change the awful awful guitar

Posted by State of Matter on Oct-07-2004 23:11:

Personal preference, I personally love the guitar sound and I'm gonna leave it. I appreciate the feedback though, thanks guys.

Posted by Thunder5 on Oct-07-2004 23:20:

Mint track there mate..

Really like the melody.

Posted by displaced on Oct-08-2004 03:13:

wow... are you putting out remix packs?
i need a new hobby at the moment...

Posted by State of Matter on Oct-08-2004 21:19:

http://home.comcast.net/~dbogle/time_will_heal_midi.mid

Midi file, have fun

Posted by Massive84 on Oct-09-2004 13:16:

Cool will try to give it a shot with the midi.

Intro reminds me alot of Radiance, one of my favorite things from this board.

Still lack the full version , any release info or something?

Things i kinda miss, is the perc, it's to tight and coverd(drowned)

you introduce the guitar(which i like) kinda to sudden with that string sequence, maybe build it up with the filter?(just a taste thing)

Further nice melodies , bass could be a little stronger.

Posted by TOR on Oct-09-2004 13:19:

got the midi.. a LOT of instruments in there, hehe...

i really love that guitar melody, but i still think the sound you used is way too artificial. it's too fluffy as well in comparison to those mighty strings.

Posted by EternalMusic on Oct-09-2004 15:57:

Hi ,
Its a really nice tune. I actually liked the guitar, it sounded abit strange in some parts but its good enough. The only thing that bothers me is the low freqs, i cant hear a bass, and if its there somewhere you need to bring it to the front more or something.
Sweet melody btw .

Antonio.

Posted by Timothy on Oct-09-2004 17:10:

The strings are really well made ( allmost sound like real strings to me ). The break is really nice. But after the break it's a bit too "messy". I'd like to see the track made more "cleaner".

The track sound very nice. The melodies are very good

Posted by State of Matter on Oct-11-2004 00:58:

Thanks guys. I'm gonna work on an even more relaxed, downtempo version of this in a progressive style.

Looking forward to the remixes, those of you who are seriously considering it.

Posted by RaverBabySy on Oct-11-2004 20:51:

Sounds very pro, pads are a little loud, leaves a ringing in the ear! Lead sounds very summery but is completely ruined by the overbearing pads. Sounds like this could be very good with the right amendments.

Posted by State of Matter on Oct-11-2004 21:43:

Yeah, that's the compression wrecking the high frequencies. Here's a 192kbps clip of the second breakdown, i dont find the pads any louder/overpowering than those in Spiral or similar tracks, but if they are definitely let me know.

Click

Posted by JohnOC on Oct-15-2004 13:25:

epic trance bliss
gorgeous

production seems a bit muddy in places though

Posted by Mycron on Oct-15-2004 15:51:

really love the strings in your track, the melody is ace as usual, love the guitar, but in my point of view the bass needs more drive, you should work on it, and then you will get a beauty

like your style

keep it up

Peter