Harmonic Tremors & Redub----------H-LAB

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Posted by H-LAB on Apr-10-2005 04:39:

Harmonic Tremors & Redub----------H-LAB

JOINT SMOKIN
NON-PARANOID
HEAD NODDERS

CHECK OUT MY 2 NEW TUNES AT
http://www.canadianmusic.com/artists/h-lab

FEEDBACK WELCOME

Thanks
H-LAB PROJECT
respect to those that feel this style

Posted by Tech0rz on Apr-10-2005 16:28:

I think that synth is too strong, the one that comes in every now and again.

Infact the sound levels are in dyer need of attention.

The kick is really weak. compared to everything else.

Try >these < (courtest of Sirroco)

Nice pattern to the main synth tho. but it never ends or changes throughout the song.

It overall sounds too cluttered. Work on Mastering and EQing to get things to sit in the mix better. I keep hearing horrible buzzing. Try working on each part for longer until its JUST how u want it. I'm always playing constantly with volume/pan, EQ's and such to make sure its sounding right. There are plenty of resources out there, start with the stickies on the production board.

But however, i don't want to discourage you by any means, keep up the good work, and stick with it. Practice makes perfect (and research )

Posted by Digital Aura on Apr-10-2005 18:12:

Yeah definitely comin in there way too loud!

Doesnt help having that overamped distortion FX on it...makes it sound like it is clipping!
The pads are also not musically in the same key as the leads. The melody is a killer hook! I like it! I'd smooth that lead down a tad. Its alright when you scale the volume back in the fade out, but I'd also consider a slight filter sweep on it to take the edge off it. That would create some good tension as well!

Great song though! Congrats on #2 spot there! Never seen those Canadian boards before. I'll have to check out!

Posted by H-LAB on Apr-10-2005 21:37:

Thanks for the feedback!

There are good vibes on this forum!

H-LAB PROJECT
http://www.canadianmusic.com/artists/h-lab

Posted by H-LAB on Apr-11-2005 15:32:

Re: H-lab-------------dysautonomia

quote:
Originally posted by H-LAB
JOINT SMOKIN
NON-PARANOID
HEAD NODDERS

CHECK OUT MY TUNES AT
http://www.canadianmusic.com/artists/h-lab

FEEDBACK WELCOME

Thanks
H-LAB PROJECT
respect to those that feel this style

BUMP DAT

Posted by kopi_luwak on Apr-11-2005 16:12:

Hey, listening, that first Phat synth that appears when it's being released out with the filter is too loud and creates distorsion though.
LOL ... at 1:34 u fucking scared the shit out of me LOL, I was like, dreamy pad, yum yum *AHHHHHHHH* haqha.
In overall, the Track has kinda a sweet style, but u need to work a lot ur mastering dood, plus balance ur sounds because some are totally out of the range, but I liked the melodys, nice thang u have here, good work .
Kopi =o.

Posted by H-LAB on Apr-11-2005 16:23:

Thanks for the feedback!

Your tracks aren't that bad at all! Keep it up!

@ NEW TRACKS UP TONIGHT @

H-LAB PROJECT
respect to those that feel this

"B.C Bred----------T-DOT Grind"

Posted by cartlemmy on Apr-11-2005 16:44:

Ya! that main melody is really nice. I know what y'all are saying about the production, but I kind of like the harshness of it.

Posted by H-LAB on Apr-11-2005 22:08:

quote:
Originally posted by cartlemmy
Ya! that main melody is really nice. I know what y'all are saying about the production, but I kind of like the harshness of it.

respect

Thanks for the feedback!!

I have 2 new tracks up !!!
http://www.canadianmusic.com/artists/h-lab
Check em out!!!

H-LAB PROJECT
respect to those that feel this

Posted by Axolotyl on Apr-12-2005 00:38:

mmm... crunchy

theres some clipping or noise right at the start I think.

Fuck, this track is totally clipping actually. Try bringing your levels down to less than 0bd ... red is bad mmmm..kay =)

Other than that... melody is a bit repeditive. Try working on your actualy sounds too. That one on the main melody smacks of swedish euro pop or something. Otherwise nice vocal sample (could do with less delay on it though) and the overall groove you have going is kinda cool. =)

Posted by H-LAB on Apr-12-2005 13:57:

quote:
Originally posted by cartlemmy
Ya! that main melody is really nice. I know what y'all are saying about the production, but I kind of like the harshness of it.

BUMP DAT

Posted by H-LAB on Apr-13-2005 00:25:

2 NEW TRACKS UP NOW!!!!!

http://www.canadianmusic.com/artists/h-lab

somethin new!!

respect
H-LAB PROJECT

Posted by Tech0rz on Apr-13-2005 00:40:

i dunno what kind of feedback you were hoping for. But usually when people say something is seriously wrong with the song, they go away and try and sort it out. You're not gonna get anywhere unless you actually listen to what people say and take it on board. I'm listening again to your song and it's not been changed at all.

Hate to sound harsh but it realllly needs sorting out. If this was mastered and tweaked it might actualy be listenable.

Posted by H-LAB on Apr-13-2005 03:45:

quote:
Originally posted by Tech0rz
i dunno what kind of feedback you were hoping for. But usually when people say something is seriously wrong with the song, they go away and try and sort it out. You're not gonna get anywhere unless you actually listen to what people say and take it on board. I'm listening again to your song and it's not been changed at all.

Hate to sound harsh but it realllly needs sorting out. If this was mastered and tweaked it might actualy be listenable.

No one said there was anything "wrong with that song".

You say " I'm listening to it again" Thats all that counts

Its all about the tunes!!

Anyone want to challenge me? refer to the "MUSIC DISCUSSION FORUM"
to get a better idea!!

Its on!!!

H-LAB PROJECT
"your shits weak like 7 days"
respect to those that feel this style

Posted by Tech0rz on Apr-13-2005 10:46:

quote:
Originally posted by Various TA Members

I think that synth is too strong, the one that comes in every now and again.

Infact the sound levels are in dyer need of attention.

The kick is really weak. compared to everything else.

It overall sounds too cluttered.

I keep hearing horrible buzzing.

Yeah definitely comin in there way too loud!

The pads are also not musically in the same key as the leads.

theres some clipping or noise right at the start

Fuck, this track is totally clipping actually.

If you can't see anything "wrong" in that then you're never gonna improve and thats a fact.

I was listening again, yea, to see if you had taken the feedback on board. Just because i listened to it doesn't mean it's because enjoyed it.

Of course! It's all about the tunes. But whether you're making them for yourself and you don't care what they sound like, or whether your making them for other people to enjoy, making them to the best of your ability, is a totally different matter altogether. By all means carry on the way you are, and see the same old feedback flooding in.