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Posted by Romi on Dec-04-2005 16:50:

ROMi - Panoramic (Final)

Hi there,

Here's the final result, i have added some more effects and changed some other little things. Thx for the tips and suggestions.

Here's the final version (96k):

http://www.wire.fm/board/two-song.php?id=19683

-Ron

Posted by Four_On_Four-er on Dec-04-2005 16:54:

Beautiful intro...

I can't really complain about the intro other than I think it is a tad long. It has an excellent vibe that continues into the trance beat. Maybe you'd want to hold off on those melodies and build up to them more from a deeper trance beat. Just a thought, but I'm not at your skill level IMO.

Posted by Romi on Dec-04-2005 18:59:

Thx for the comment Four_On_Four-er. Forgot to say the clip starts with the break.

Posted by Romi on Dec-04-2005 19:26:

Updated version now available here:

http://www.wire.fm/board/two-song.php?id=19251

Posted by websley on Dec-05-2005 00:52:

Hello Romi,

This is my kind of Trance and it still doesn't loose it's grip, the "sunset"-Trance, I mean by that
Nice atmos U created, but I really need a break/build-up in this one cause you surprised me with the ending. Means the song structure could be a lot better. (I guess you probably are working on that at the moment)
Rhythm is nicely done, only the snare afterbeat seems to be a bit in the thin side. (by that, I mean it sounds like a hiss-sound)

Hope you'll be working on this one, and check my new one if you like.

-weBs

Posted by azndragon0613 on Dec-05-2005 06:09:

Hey Romi,

Nice atmosphere to start out the song. The bassline sounds to come in abruptly...maybe add some effects or a swoosh. The loop gets old after some time, but I like the surreal feel to the song.

Nice work

Posted by Romi on Dec-05-2005 07:43:

Thx for the suggestions guys. And websley, as i said in my begintopic, it's just a portion of the break and a part of the climax for now, so yes, the structure is gonna be a lot more different, still working on the build-up and other parts. I have checked out your track websley, nice one.

Posted by Stino on Dec-05-2005 11:11:

great atmosphere and melody, but i feel the bass is a bit to loud and that estuera/jonas steur typa synth is a bit over used, but very cool work so far, the kick/bass/percussion combo works awesome.

Posted by richg101 on Dec-05-2005 13:47:

hi ron

by the way cheers for the review of my track..

onto panoramic..

i love the 'vangelis' sound you use. its really 80's and lush sounding. bass is nice. it sounds dirty! and complements your clean style.

i have very high hopes for this. i think this is one of my favourites of yours.

please please please! change some of the percs you use on this. for some unusual sounds. i think the percs are a bit standard and the melodies are far from standard.. i mean you could add like a ring modulator effect to the clap for example and end up with a wicked sound that would add to the unusal spacy melodies your using..?

when its done please can i have a 320k because i really like this..

rich

Posted by RickyM on Dec-05-2005 17:46:

Hey Romi

Cool track you got here indeed, though I feel the break at the start is a little thin, those strings are all very 'high'sounding, I would throw in a big low string to complement them. The bass and kick are very well done though, very driving. Keep it up!

Posted by b i n k u n on Dec-05-2005 21:52:

nice one Romi.

can't comment too much on the production level as i'm on computer speakers now, but i like the feel of this track. i think the break (which i presume is the beginning intro of your sample) could do with some more ambient pads or effects in the background tho, sounds a bit thin at the moment.

but melody-wise, it's real nice to listen to. keep it up man.

Posted by Nemesis44 on Dec-05-2005 22:27:

Very nice,
Just been working on one of my own dark and moody tracks and ears were getting tired. This was a nice break and very uplifting. thanks for sharing it.

Keep up the good work

Cheers
Nem

Posted by Romi on Dec-07-2005 19:50:

Thx again for the comments and ofcourse the suggestions. There are some i can and will use for sure when i work on it a bit more. Not that much time lately, maybe in the weekend.

Posted by Romi on Dec-11-2005 15:22:

Once again updated with a new preview:

http://www.wire.fm/board/two-song.php?id=19357

Posted by richg101 on Dec-11-2005 15:36:

i love the 80's soundtracky melody you have going on. like the sort of thing an adventure film would have had. maybe reminds me of the eery soundtrack to 'the goonies' - in a good way!

from what i remember it sounds a lot cleaner than before..

i love the plucky bass. i think maybe the build could be arranged diffently. overall the sound is really full and balenced and shouldnt be played with too much.

could you do a chill version...? i think the melody would do really well in a nice warm chill down track..

i love that melody ron!

rich

if you have time please check my latest thread (klems vs liloo rmx).. leave a comment

Posted by technoman on Dec-11-2005 16:32:

great stuff man

Hey Romi,

That track sounds great man.You obviously have talent.

Go check out the post in the production studio"keep trance alive"
I think it would be perfect for you.

Posted by technoman on Dec-11-2005 16:42:

Sound

Hey ROMI,

Im new to producing so im trying to learn.
In your updated track at around 3:14 you are left with the kick,and i think they are called hihat sounds.What is that other sound thats going along with the kick in the background.

What does it do for a track?
Thanks

Posted by Romi on Dec-12-2005 06:15:

Thx for the replies. I don't know exactly what you mean technoman, but there are a lot of sounds playing at that time, such as open/closed hh's, shakers, kick and bass ofcourse. Try to use google and search for some of these terms, then you can learn more about them.

Posted by Romi on Dec-19-2005 19:44:

Updated www-edit here:

http://www.wire.fm/board/two-song.php?id=19578

Posted by Romi on Dec-20-2005 06:12:

Is there someone with some usefull tips for this one maybe?

-Ron

Posted by Romi on Dec-22-2005 21:21:

Final version (96k) can be found here:

http://www.wire.fm/board/two-song.php?id=19683

Thx again for the replies and tips.

Posted by D.J.Animus on Dec-22-2005 22:19:

This is the embodiement of the sort of sound that I would like to create. Although as in past coments it could and I think will be much better. This is how I like trance. Thanks for this.

Posted by Romi on Dec-24-2005 07:32:

Thx for your nice reaction D.J.Animus. Good luck with your own musicmaking .