First Track - First Project:: Please Comment

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Posted by Khayat on Mar-25-2007 17:40:

First Track - First Project:: Please Comment

Dear TA this is our first project please comment as we are at stage 90 % I think and we need to finish it
Please comment on the subject the main tune and NOT THE QUALITY.I know the quality is shit but I will re record it and master it after its 100 %.
The Track is called SOLITUDE
HERE IS THE LINK
MYSPACE
...AND DO U THINK ITS WORTH??
THANKSSSSSSSSSSSS in advance

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Mar-25-2007 17:48:

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74

Posted by Khayat on Mar-25-2007 17:49:

Yes I know but as I said its not finished and I dont need to promote as Im still asking you guys

Posted by offthebeat on Mar-25-2007 18:08:

good track, i think itll be better if the melody would come at 01:15, it sounds a bit empty at that point. Good melodies, I like them. Track needs couple more instruments i'd say. try to get rid off emptiness, create more variaty, so the listener wont get bored. hope that helps.

Posted by Khayat on Mar-25-2007 18:09:

thanx maaan I will work on it

Posted by jey on Mar-25-2007 19:42:

sounds ok, kinda dull after a wile! muddy and distorted is the first thing that hits me!

Posted by Khayat on Mar-25-2007 19:44:

whatdo u think does it need ?

Posted by jey on Mar-25-2007 19:48:

id personally add more life to it! get it more uplifting but u may be after the sorrow sound