Originally posted by szm
yea I feel that, too much pressure going on.
actually I had recorded something else, but I came back to it didnt like the low end : too beefy, also didnt like the percs either, so that post is a lie, its the second recording, I switched it.
I just didnt like the wip, but I have the copy of it if you wanna see what I mean, its not exciting to me. the previous entry excites me more.
its a little out of tune ;\
Sooo atmospheric szm. These ALL have so much great potential that you put out!
Been awhile gang...nice to see you guys still going!
WIP crossover Liquid>Dance Floor DnB. Still working out the transition and reese at the end but like the direction
Last edited by SystematicX1 on Apr-23-2025 at 15:06
Apr-20-2025 21:19
szm
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ur too kind on my boring shit.
great wip, really enjoy that ambitious bass at the latter part, maybe if the resonant peaks were even higher on it, it could be more hooky methinks.
just spitballing, maybe some mixed reverb on the rimshot could be beneficial as seems a bit static, same with the piano. other than that hats off i enjoy.
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Apr-24-2025 17:22
SystematicX1
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Originally posted by szm
ur too kind on my boring shit.
great wip, really enjoy that ambitious bass at the latter part, maybe if the resonant peaks were even higher on it, it could be more hooky methinks.
just spitballing, maybe some mixed reverb on the rimshot could be beneficial as seems a bit static, same with the piano. other than that hats off i enjoy.
Thanks Bud! Appreciate the feedback. That back side Reese is still in development. I am not to fond of the design work and left it as a placeholder until I can re develop it as the intention is to transition into a Dancefloor style D&B Bass line from the "ambience" of the static Sub from the Liquid side.
Percussion is next! I agree, that Shot could use a little verb.
Piano's are actually very deep and layered immensely. I am sure you will get that resonance once I EQ.
I would ask if you don't mind.
The chord changes on the second bars are most obviously...odd; tonally
is it too odd?
Am I getting enough punch on the ending kick/percussion? Seems thin and maybe it's because I am not giving enough intensity to the drop before it that makes it seem lethargic
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Apr-24-2025 20:59
szm
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thats above my wheelhouse, sorry brother. thought your kick was clipping but i think that was piano.
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Apr-25-2025 03:56
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I've been at it again last Sunday. It has been a while. First one is me revisited a track which isn't finished after 2-3 years but I still like it. Second one is something from yesterday too. Remainder is just older WIP stuff untouched.
If less is more think about how much more more would be.
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Jun-09-2025 06:19
TranceLover007
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Location: Seattle, USA
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Originally posted by Storyteller
I've been at it again last Sunday. It has been a while. First one is me revisited a track which isn't finished after 2-3 years but I still like it. Second one is something from yesterday too. Remainder is just older WIP stuff untouched.
So far I like Storyteller - 071-beatje - nice dynamics and melody line.
Darek
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