amazing thing man. you bring a classic ochestral emotional sound in this tune. Cant explain how but your do it so well.

keep up the good work

Thanks for the encouraging word.

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This is different, but good different. I thuroughly enjoy the melodies, although the production has a few flaws in my opinion. I would personaly use a different kick cause this one is too wide/reverbed and takes away from the harmonics of the melodic instrumentation. Also the percusion(hi's) stand out overtop the melody- which should be the other way around...
Overall, I really love the melodies and think this track has loads of potential to be something very sweet...

i really like the melodies and synths you used here, but one suggestion i will tender is try some harmoization with your melodies, i knoticed you would just use a different synth jacked up a couple octaves, try and take advantage of major and minor thirds and sevenths to harmonize melodies gives it a very full and complex sound....

you seem to have the basics down pat keep up the good work

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Yeah, that kick is too reverbed for the kind of sound I think you trying to get. Tone it down a bit and I think it'd be a bunch better. The melody soothes me though.

Thanks for the feedback!

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one suggestion i will tender is try some harmoization with your melodies

K, Thanks...good suggestion.

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Yeah, that kick is too reverbed for the kind of sound I think you trying to get.

Too much reverb through the whole song, or just on that part where it is mostly strings?

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