Please, I need some comments. I'm at a road block with this track and need some guidence on how to touch it up.

Cheers,
Zac

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well, first i think it starts off faster than most people would expect, maybe 140bpm is too fast?

sounds quite Plastic Boy/Push-ish, thats a good thing

i think the track is a bit too repetitive, and im only just over half way through.

this outro which i know isnt an outro because there is still time left on the track, should be an outro basically the track is too long.

overall, nice sounds, professionally made, but too long and gets tiring after a while

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Ok i've just listened and first thing im not impressed is percussion.It needs some EQing ,nice pads and fx .You have to learn more about mastering your sound! It definitely isn't progressive :P

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Hey. Thanks for the posts.

@mark_the_gooner - I know what you mean about being a bit too reptative. I think the filter sweeping I was planning on doing with some of the instruments in some places in the song will fix that a bit though. I'd like to know the spot you think the outro should be. The very end, the last 8 bars I tacked on so it would be a full rounded club mix with a kick intro and a kick outro. If you're talking about before those 8 bars, your right, its a bit of a cliff down to the kick outro lol.

@Dj_Underwater - I'm not sure what you mean by mastering. The track has been sent through the Sonic Maximizer, compressed, and EQ'ed. I could be coming down with a cold which effects the resonancein my ears but generally speaking, I can almost perfectly master a track in a few hours. So I'm a bit troubled by what you meant? Also, how can this not be progressive trance? No, its not straight progressive, but check out any of the new progressive trance songs and youll hear similar elements... Again, I'm a bit troubled by what you meant. Elaboration would be helpful lol.

Cheers,
Zac

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DarkSword - Turn On
DarkSword - Hell Bound
DarkSword - Fresh
DarkSword - Styled
DarkSword - Shadowed Sun
DarkSword - Turning Forward
DarkSword - ALLFRUIT
Pacific Mint vs DarkSword - Climax Zone 2005
SoundClick Page

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