whoooa..i love this tune nice remix man!..just like he said..yea the bass could be improved.But overall...nice arrangement..good sounds so i give this a 8/10 good work man
Apr-01-2005 16:54
Arctic Breeze
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Drammen, Norway
Omg! 96 kbps!
I don't like the percussion line in the beginning. Feels like the beats stalls or something. Getting better with the open hihat @ 0:58. Bassdrum lacks power, bassline... I'm really getting tired of that recepie. Doesn't take too much to make it more interresting. Lead is allright, you should add more power to the punch @ 3:28. Some reverb maybe? I like the melody (strings) but don't feel the lead that follows keeps up with the melody, it's just the same over an over again.
But I think you made a good remix of Cloudland. I have just heard a sample of the original (Peter: ) which I think was a total mess of sounds, but this actually sounds like something!
Keep it up!
lead sounds massive
good build
good energy
track sounds too typical
way too overcompressed
bass and kick lack punch
Apr-02-2005 06:06
alexpea
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Mosjøen, Norway
Something strange at 02.20...
Cool lead-melody. I'm really liking the sound!
03.28 that kick is too weak, as someone mentioned.. Add reverb and compression to it
Hmmm...sweet strings. At 04.25 I simply LOVE the sound when you fade in that synth. Which software are you using? That synth is god damn good man
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Apr-02-2005 09:06
d-miurge
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Unicornland
quote:
Originally posted by alexpea
Which software are you using? That synth is god damn good man
they use a real Jp8000 if I remember...
Nice track Ferry, hope to see Orée in the higher place !
Apr-02-2005 10:10
Luke Terry
tranceaddict oldskool
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne
build melody rips off rmb - redemption
bass is pretty weak
apart from that its spot on, i really like the percs + lead, ill send you some bass patches on msn later help beef up the low end
the mel sounds as though it slightly goes out of sync when it filters up i think...
I thought it reminded me of an old Alya song actually but now that you mention it ur prob right. Not a bad track though. After about 5 minutes it gets going very nicely. Good job