heres my new electro track plz reply with tips and feedback enjoy....

the tracks called illigal, got a better suggestion plz reply

Last edited by dj justin v on Dec-22-2005 at 03:10

A link might help a bit

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soz da link didnt work get it through here..........

enjoy

its a really smalll sampple but yeah

http://s14.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...B10IVWRFT3V77NB
enjoy n fb plz

Cool stuff, very techno-ish. Work more on your 'full' sound.

Nice man,

William

The track needs a lot of work still, however I really liked what you had... this could be an amazing track!!
Keep working on it, and let us know when you're done... I'd like to play it out
Cheers

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It's a good start but it needs some more events to keep it from becoming boring.
It also needs a lot of work in terms of EQ as the overall sound is still quite muddy.

You have some nice ideas there so keep working and try to build on what you have.

Cheers
Karl

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i edited it alot and sounds very diffrent now i might post it l8r today

fanks for the feed bak

hey pplz
chek it out i edited sounds much better, needs more work n still wokrin on it.

yousendit link: http://s6.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1...4O04NIVY1VVF5ZD


feed back please

I liked the other one better.
I don't feel the main synth on this one.
The hats are quite loud.
The kick needs to be EQed.
The whole track needs to be mastered.

You are still on the right path, however the track needs a lot of work still
Keep working on it, you have a great track right there... u just need to work on it harder.
Cheers

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Yup, the kick is still very muddy as is the bass.

On the kick try taking out some of the lower end frequencies below 60Hz (Always get the Hz and the Khz mixed up) and keep it around 90 to 100 for the bass.

This way you get rid of the unheard frequencies that eat up your headroom.

The high hats are breaking through a little too much as well so there is still an overall balance issue with the track. When working on a track focus more on the balance of the sounds, it's not necessary for the bass to boom. You will often find that if you have used the right sounds you will get that anyway especially if you have used the right sounds.

What equipment are you using?

Not that I'm an expert by any means but if you are using FL then you can PM me and send me a copy and I will show you what I mean.

Cheers
Nem

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or if you're using Logic, Reason or Ableton I'll show you

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